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English lesson plan · 12th grade (Year 13 in England) · 60 minutes

Is it an arguable thesis?

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CCSS W.11-12.1.ACCSS W.11-12.2.AEngland: A-level English (essay writing)England: AP Language and LiteratureEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Is it an arguable thesis?.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Thesis statements and supporting evidence; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 6 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Thesis statements and supporting evidence; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which part of the Toulmin model matches this description? A word or phrase that limits how strongly the claim is made. (backing / rebuttal / warrant / qualifier) → qualifierPrompt: Ask what job each part does: state, prove, connect, support the connection, limit, or admit exceptions.
  2. Thesis: The town should ban single-use plastic bags. Which sentence best acknowledges and answers a counterargument? (Bags can be blue or white. / Everyone agrees with me. / Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves. / Plastic bags are bad.) → Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.
  3. Which part of a Toulmin argument is this sentence? Separating cyclists from traffic reduces collisions. (warrant / claim / grounds / backing) → warrantPrompt: Is it the position itself, a piece of evidence, the link between them, support for that link, a limiting word like 'in most cases', or an 'unless'?

Hook · 6 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Is it an arguable thesis?. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 12 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? This essay is about the novel 'Frankenstein'.
  • Step 1: A strong thesis is arguable, specific and often previews its reasons; facts, vague generalisations and topic announcements are not theses.
  • Step 2: It announces the subject only.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: an announcement of the topic
  • Answer: an announcement of the topic
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 12 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? Shakespeare is a very important writer. (arguable, specific thesis / just a fact / too broad or vague / an announcement of the topic) → too broad or vaguePrompt: Could a reasonable person disagree with it? If not, it's a fact or an announcement.
  2. Which statement is this: just a fact? (The Second World War ended in 1945. / Social media has changed the way teenagers communicate. / In Macbeth, Shakespeare presents ambition not as a personal flaw alone but as a force encouraged by the people around Macbeth, especially his wife.) → The Second World War ended in 1945.Prompt: Could a reasonable person disagree with it? If not, it's a fact or an announcement.

You do: independent practice · 17 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 7 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? Water boils at 100 °C at sea level. (arguable, specific thesis / just a fact / too broad or vague / an announcement of the topic) → just a factPrompt: Could a reasonable person disagree with it? If not, it's a fact or an announcement.
  2. Which statement is this: an announcement of the topic? (The voting age should be lowered to sixteen because sixteen-year-olds already work, pay tax and can make informed choices. / This essay is about the novel 'Frankenstein'. / Cities should prioritise protected cycle lanes over new car parks, because they reduce congestion and pollution at lower cost.) → This essay is about the novel 'Frankenstein'.Prompt: Could a reasonable person disagree with it? If not, it's a fact or an announcement.

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Thesis statements and supporting evidence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-12.

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Is it an arguable thesis?

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  1. Question 1

    Which statement is this: just a fact?

    • A. In this essay I will talk about climate change.
    • B. Electric cars produce no exhaust emissions while driving.
    • C. Social media has changed the way teenagers communicate.
  2. Question 2

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? Schools should replace one hour of screen time a day with outdoor learning, because it improves both concentration and wellbeing.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic
  3. Question 3

    Which statement is this: an announcement of the topic?

    • A. Electric cars produce no exhaust emissions while driving.
    • B. Water boils at 100 °C at sea level.
    • C. In this essay I will talk about climate change.
  4. Question 4

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? The Second World War ended in 1945.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic
  5. Question 5

    Which statement is this: arguable, specific thesis?

    • A. Water boils at 100 °C at sea level.
    • B. In this essay I will talk about climate change.
    • C. The voting age should be lowered to sixteen because sixteen-year-olds already work, pay tax and can make informed choices.
  6. Question 6

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? This essay is about the novel 'Frankenstein'.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic
  7. Question 7

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? Water boils at 100 °C at sea level.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic
  8. Question 8

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? Social media has changed the way teenagers communicate.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic

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Answer key: Is it an arguable thesis?

  1. 1. B. Electric cars produce no exhaust emissions while driving.

  2. 2. A. arguable, specific thesis

  3. 3. C. In this essay I will talk about climate change.

  4. 4. B. just a fact

  5. 5. C. The voting age should be lowered to sixteen because sixteen-year-olds already work, pay tax and can make informed choices.

  6. 6. D. an announcement of the topic

  7. 7. B. just a fact

  8. 8. C. too broad or vague