English lesson plan · 12th grade (Year 13 in England) · 60 minutes
Writing a concession and rebuttal
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.11-12.1.BCCSS W.11-12.1.CEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5England: AP Language (argument essay)England: A-level Extended Project
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Writing a concession and rebuttal.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 6 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "The school day should include 30 minutes of silent reading." Which sentence is the strongest REBUTTAL to the counterclaim that 'there isn't time in the timetable'? → Taking just five minutes from each lesson would create the time without losing any subject. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → yes, it is correctPrompt: A counterclaim states the opposing view; a rebuttal answers it.
- Which part of the Toulmin model matches this description? Extra support for the warrant itself. (rebuttal / grounds / backing / warrant) → backingPrompt: Ask what job each part does: state, prove, connect, support the connection, limit, or admit exceptions.
- Claim: "Students should learn to code at school." Which sentence is a COUNTERCLAIM? (Coding teaches logical thinking. / Many jobs now require digital skills. / However, problem-solving skills last even when tools change. / Critics argue that coding tools change so fast that what students learn will soon be out of date.) → Critics argue that coding tools change so fast that what students learn will soon be out of date.Prompt: A counterclaim states the opposing view; a rebuttal answers it.
Hook · 6 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Writing a concession and rebuttal. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 12 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Claim: "Schools should teach financial literacy." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it?
- Step 1: Concede (admittedly, although, granted, it is true that) and then rebut (however, yet, nevertheless) to show fairness and strengthen your case.
- Step 2: It accepts the time problem but shows the benefit outweighs it.
- Step 3: So the answer is: It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades.
- Answer: It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 12 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Claim: "Cities should ban cars from their historic centres." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? (Although some shops fear losing customers, several cities found that footfall actually rose after their centres went car-free. / Shopkeepers are always wrong about everything. / Although some shops fear losing customers, they are right, so we should not ban cars. / Cars are noisy.) → Although some shops fear losing customers, several cities found that footfall actually rose after their centres went car-free.Prompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
- Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Cities should ban cars from their historic centres." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → Shopkeepers are always wrong about everything. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
You do: independent practice · 17 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 7 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Museums should be free for everyone." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → While free entry costs money to fund, it pays back by attracting visitors who spend in cafés, shops and the wider city. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → yes, it is correctPrompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
- Claim: "Schools should teach financial literacy." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? (The timetable is crowded, so we cannot teach anything new. / It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades. / Money is important. / Everyone should be rich.) → It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades.Prompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-12.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder