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English lesson plan · 6th grade (Year 7 in England) · 60 minutes

Fragments and run-on sentences

Writing & Editing

CCSS L.6.1CCSS L.4.1.FEngland: KS2 SATs GPSEngland: KS3 Writing

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Fragments and run-on sentences.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: What makes a sentence?; Combining sentences

Leads to: Concision: cutting wordiness and redundancy; Sentence boundaries (SAT/ACT); Spotting and fixing comma splices

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 6 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (What makes a sentence?; Combining sentences). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which one is a complete sentence? • grows tomatoes • Grandad grows tomatoes. • Grandad tomatoes. • grandad grows (grows tomatoes / Grandad grows tomatoes. / Grandad tomatoes. / grandad grows) → Grandad grows tomatoes.Prompt: A sentence needs someone or something AND what they do.
  2. Which is the best way to join these sentences? We stayed inside. It was raining. • We stayed inside but it was raining. • Because we stayed inside it was raining. • We stayed inside because it was raining. • We stayed inside, it was raining. (We stayed inside but it was raining. / Because we stayed inside it was raining. / We stayed inside because it was raining. / We stayed inside, it was raining.) → We stayed inside because it was raining.Prompt: How are the two ideas linked: adding, contrasting, giving a reason, or a result?
  3. Which one is a complete sentence? • the wind blew • The wind blew the leaves. • blew the leaves • The wind the leaves. (the wind blew / The wind blew the leaves. / blew the leaves / The wind the leaves.) → The wind blew the leaves.Prompt: A sentence needs someone or something AND what they do.

Hook · 6 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Fragments and run-on sentences. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 12 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The bus was late, we missed the start of the film.
  • Step 1: A fragment lacks a main clause. A run-on (or comma splice) joins two main clauses without proper punctuation or a conjunction.
  • Step 2: So the answer is: run-on
  • Answer: run-on
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 12 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? My brother plays the drums, and my sister plays the flute. (fragment / run-on / correct sentence) → correct sentencePrompt: Does it have a main clause (a subject and verb that can stand alone)?
  2. Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The bus was late, so we missed the start of the film. (fragment / run-on / correct sentence) → correct sentencePrompt: Does it have a main clause (a subject and verb that can stand alone)?

You do: independent practice · 17 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 7 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The bus was late, we missed the start of the film. (fragment / run-on / correct sentence) → run-onPrompt: Does it have a main clause (a subject and verb that can stand alone)?
  2. Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? Running down the hill towards the river. (fragment / run-on / correct sentence) → fragmentPrompt: Does it have a main clause (a subject and verb that can stand alone)?

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: What makes a sentence?.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Concision: cutting wordiness and redundancy; Sentence boundaries (SAT/ACT); Spotting and fixing comma splices.
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Fragments and run-on sentences

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  1. Question 1

    Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The storm was loud I couldn't sleep at all.

    • A. fragment
    • B. run-on
    • C. correct sentence
  2. Question 2

    Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? I love swimming it is the thing I enjoy most.

    • A. fragment
    • B. run-on
    • C. correct sentence
  3. Question 3

    Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? Because the bus was late.

    • A. fragment
    • B. run-on
    • C. correct sentence
  4. Question 4

    Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? My brother plays the drums, and my sister plays the flute.

    • A. fragment
    • B. run-on
    • C. correct sentence
  5. Question 5

    Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The cake was delicious, everyone wanted another slice.

    • A. fragment
    • B. run-on
    • C. correct sentence
  6. Question 6

    Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? Although she was tired, Anya finished her book.

    • A. fragment
    • B. run-on
    • C. correct sentence
  7. Question 7

    Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The bus was late, we missed the start of the film.

    • A. fragment
    • B. run-on
    • C. correct sentence
  8. Question 8

    Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The bus was late, so we missed the start of the film.

    • A. fragment
    • B. run-on
    • C. correct sentence

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Answer key: Fragments and run-on sentences

  1. 1. B. run-on

  2. 2. B. run-on

  3. 3. A. fragment

  4. 4. C. correct sentence

  5. 5. B. run-on

  6. 6. C. correct sentence

  7. 7. B. run-on

  8. 8. C. correct sentence