English lesson plan · 12th grade (Year 13 in England) · 60 minutes
Paraphrase, quotation or plagiarism?
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.11-12.8CCSS W.9-10.8England: A-level Extended Project (academic honesty)England: AP Seminar and ResearchEngland: University preparation
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Paraphrase, quotation or plagiarism?.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Evaluating research sources: primary vs secondary, authority, purpose
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 6 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Evaluating research sources: primary vs secondary, authority, purpose). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- For a research project, is this usually a primary or a secondary source? a diary written by a soldier during the First World War (primary source / secondary source) → primary sourcePrompt: Was it created at the time, by someone directly involved?
- Read the question and choose. What does 'peer-reviewed' mean? (other experts checked the research before it was published / it is very popular / it was written by students / it was published online) → other experts checked the research before it was publishedPrompt: Think about authority (who made it), currency (when), purpose (why) and evidence (how).
- For a research project, is this usually a primary or a secondary source? a magazine article summarising several scientific studies (primary source / secondary source) → secondary sourcePrompt: Was it created at the time, by someone directly involved?
Hook · 6 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Paraphrase, quotation or plagiarism?. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 12 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: How should the student's version be classified? Original (Okafor, 2021): "Urban trees reduce summer temperatures by shading streets and releasing water vapour." Student: According to Okafor (2021), city trees cool streets in summer through shade and the moisture they give off.
- Step 1: Always credit sources. Use quotation marks for exact words, and paraphrase in your own words and structure; swapping a few words (patchwriting) is not enough.
- Step 2: New wording and sentence structure, with the source credited.
- Step 3: So the answer is: acceptable paraphrase (with citation)
- Answer: acceptable paraphrase (with citation)
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 12 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- How should the student's version be classified? Original (Okafor, 2021): "Urban trees reduce summer temperatures by shading streets and releasing water vapour." Student: City trees lower summer temperatures by shading roads and releasing water vapour (Okafor, 2021). (acceptable paraphrase (with citation) / correctly cited quotation / patchwriting (too close to the original) / plagiarism) → patchwriting (too close to the original)Prompt: Is the source credited? If not, it's plagiarism, whatever the wording.
- Is this the right way to classify the student's version? Original (Lee, 2019): "Teenagers who sleep less than seven hours are more likely to report low mood." Student: Teenagers who sleep under seven hours are more likely to report a low mood (Lee, 2019). → plagiarism (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: Is the source credited? If not, it's plagiarism, whatever the wording.
You do: independent practice · 17 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 7 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Is this the right way to classify the student's version? Original (Lee, 2019): "Teenagers who sleep less than seven hours are more likely to report low mood." Student: Lee (2019) found a link between short sleep and low mood in teenagers. → patchwriting (too close to the original) (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: Is the source credited? If not, it's plagiarism, whatever the wording.
- How should the student's version be classified? Original (Lee, 2019): "Teenagers who sleep less than seven hours are more likely to report low mood." Student: Young people who get under seven hours of sleep tend to feel down more often. (acceptable paraphrase (with citation) / correctly cited quotation / patchwriting (too close to the original) / plagiarism) → plagiarismPrompt: Is the source credited? If not, it's plagiarism, whatever the wording.
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Evaluating research sources: primary vs secondary, authority, purpose.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-12.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder