Choosing the best topic sentence

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.6.2.ACCSS W.6.1.AEngland: KS3 Writing (paragraphing)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Choosing the best topic sentence.

I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
I can explain each step and say why it works.
I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Main idea and supporting details

Leads to: Choosing the detail that best supports a point

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 6 min

Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Main idea and supporting details). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.

Spiders are not insects. Insects have six legs, but spiders have eight. Insects have three body parts, while spiders have two. Most insects have wings; spiders never do. What is the main idea? (Insects can fly. / Spiders have eight legs. / Spiders are different from insects in several ways. / Spiders are scary.) → Spiders are different from insects in several ways.Prompt: What is the WHOLE text mostly about, not just one part?
Dolphins are very smart. They can learn tricks, solve puzzles and recognise themselves in a mirror. They also talk to each other with clicks and whistles. What is the main idea? (Dolphins whistle. / Dolphins like mirrors. / Dolphins live in the sea. / Dolphins are intelligent animals.) → Dolphins are intelligent animals.Prompt: What is the WHOLE text mostly about, not just one part?
Exercise is good for your body and your mind. It makes your heart and muscles stronger. It can also help you sleep better and feel happier. What is the main idea? (Muscles are strong. / Exercise has many benefits. / Running is fun. / Sleep is important.) → Exercise has many benefits.Prompt: What is the WHOLE text mostly about, not just one part?

Hook · 6 min

Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
Share the objective: Choosing the best topic sentence. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 12 min

Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
Example: ___ Walking or cycling saves money, keeps you fit and reduces traffic outside the school gates. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph?
Step 1: A topic sentence states the main point of a paragraph, and every other sentence supports it.
Step 2: So the answer is: There are good reasons to walk or cycle to school.
Answer: There are good reasons to walk or cycle to school.
Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 12 min

Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.

___ Some wear school-branded hoodies, others prefer plain jumpers, and a few would happily scrap uniform altogether. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Jumpers can be washed easily. / Uniforms come in many colours. / Hoodies are warm. / Students have very different views about school uniform.) → Students have very different views about school uniform.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?
Topic sentence: "Sleep is essential for learning." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (Some beds are more expensive than others. / During sleep, the brain stores what we learned that day. / Teenagers need around eight to ten hours a night. / Tired students find it harder to concentrate.) → Some beds are more expensive than others.Prompt: Reread the topic sentence. What is the paragraph promising to discuss?

You do: independent practice · 17 min

Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 7 min

Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.

Topic sentence: "Video calls helped many families stay close while living far apart." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (The first telephone call was made in 1876. / Grandparents could see grandchildren every week. / Families shared birthdays on screen. / Cousins in different countries played games together online.) → The first telephone call was made in 1876.Prompt: Reread the topic sentence. What is the paragraph promising to discuss?
___ Players need speed to reach the ball, stamina to last ninety minutes and the teamwork to pass accurately. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Football was invented a long time ago. / Some stadiums are huge. / Football demands a surprising mix of skills. / I scored a goal last week.) → Football demands a surprising mix of skills.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?

Watch out for

Writing everything at once without planning.
Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

Review first: Main idea and supporting details.
Use concrete materials: a model text.
Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

Move on to: Choosing the detail that best supports a point.
Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-6.

Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder

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The Phone-Free Lunch Experiment

For one month, students at Brookfield School tried something unusual: no phones at lunch. Phones stayed in lockers from twelve until one, and the dining hall filled with board games, sketchbooks and a lot more noise. The idea came from the student council. In a survey, 61 per cent of students said they spent most of lunch looking at a screen, and many said they wanted a break but found it hard to stop on their own. At first, not everyone was happy. "I thought it was a punishment," admitted Jaden, 12. "But after a week I'd learned to play chess, and now I actually look forward to lunch." Teachers noticed changes too. Ms Ortega, who supervises the hall, said there were fewer arguments and more students sitting in mixed groups. However, some students said they missed messaging family members during the day. The council will now vote on whether to keep the rule. One suggestion is a compromise: phone-free Mondays to Thursdays, with Fridays left free.

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Question 1
Read "The Phone-Free Lunch Experiment". Why does the writer include the sentence beginning 'However' in paragraph 4?
- A. to tell a joke
- B. to show a drawback of the rule, giving a balanced report
- C. to prove the rule was a total success
- D. to introduce a new topic

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Question 2
Topic sentence: "Sleep is essential for learning." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph?
- A. During sleep, the brain stores what we learned that day.
- B. Tired students find it harder to concentrate.
- C. Some beds are more expensive than others.
- D. Teenagers need around eight to ten hours a night.
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Question 3
___ Octopuses can open jars, escape from tanks and even recognise individual people. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph?
- A. Octopuses are among the cleverest animals in the sea.
- B. The sea is very deep.
- C. Jars can be hard to open.
- D. Octopuses have eight arms.
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Question 4
Topic sentence: "Video calls helped many families stay close while living far apart." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph?
- A. The first telephone call was made in 1876.
- B. Cousins in different countries played games together online.
- C. Grandparents could see grandchildren every week.
- D. Families shared birthdays on screen.
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Question 5
___ Players need speed to reach the ball, stamina to last ninety minutes and the teamwork to pass accurately. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph?
- A. Football was invented a long time ago.
- B. Some stadiums are huge.
- C. Football demands a surprising mix of skills.
- D. I scored a goal last week.
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Question 6
Topic sentence: "Bees are vital to our food supply." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph?
- A. Bees pollinate many fruit and vegetable crops.
- B. Farmers sometimes rent hives to help their crops.
- C. Without pollination, harvests of apples and almonds would fall sharply.
- D. Some people are frightened of wasps.
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Question 7
___ Some wear school-branded hoodies, others prefer plain jumpers, and a few would happily scrap uniform altogether. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph?
- A. Hoodies are warm.
- B. Uniforms come in many colours.
- C. Jumpers can be washed easily.
- D. Students have very different views about school uniform.
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Question 8
Topic sentence: "Recycling at home is easier than many families think." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph?
- A. Plastic was first invented in the 1800s.
- B. Most councils collect sorted recycling every week.
- C. A labelled box by the bin makes sorting quick.
- D. Rinsing containers takes only a few seconds.

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Answer key: Choosing the best topic sentence

1. B. to show a drawback of the rule, giving a balanced report
2. C. Some beds are more expensive than others.
3. A. Octopuses are among the cleverest animals in the sea.
4. A. The first telephone call was made in 1876.
5. C. Football demands a surprising mix of skills.
6. D. Some people are frightened of wasps.
7. D. Students have very different views about school uniform.
8. A. Plastic was first invented in the 1800s.