English lesson plan · 12th grade (Year 13 in England) · 45 minutes
Writing a concession and rebuttal
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.11-12.1.BCCSS W.11-12.1.CEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5England: AP Language (argument essay)England: A-level Extended Project
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Writing a concession and rebuttal.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "The school day should include 30 minutes of silent reading." Which sentence is the strongest REBUTTAL to the counterclaim that 'there isn't time in the timetable'? → Taking just five minutes from each lesson would create the time without losing any subject. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → yes, it is correctPrompt: A counterclaim states the opposing view; a rebuttal answers it.
- Which part of the Toulmin model matches this description? The conditions under which the claim might not hold, or the answer to an objection. (rebuttal / warrant / grounds / backing) → rebuttalPrompt: Ask what job each part does: state, prove, connect, support the connection, limit, or admit exceptions.
- Claim: "The school day should include 30 minutes of silent reading." Which sentence is the strongest REBUTTAL to the counterclaim that 'there isn't time in the timetable'? (Taking just five minutes from each lesson would create the time without losing any subject. / Some students already read at home. / Reading is fun. / Timetables are made by teachers.) → Taking just five minutes from each lesson would create the time without losing any subject.Prompt: A counterclaim states the opposing view; a rebuttal answers it.
Hook · 5 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Writing a concession and rebuttal. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Claim: "Schools should teach financial literacy." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it?
- Step 1: Concede (admittedly, although, granted, it is true that) and then rebut (however, yet, nevertheless) to show fairness and strengthen your case.
- Step 2: It accepts the time problem but shows the benefit outweighs it.
- Step 3: So the answer is: It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades.
- Answer: It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Claim: "Homework should be optional in secondary school." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? (Admittedly, homework can build independent study habits; however, the same habits can be built through optional projects that students actually choose. / Homework should be optional because I said so. / Homework is boring and nobody likes it. / Some people think homework is good, and they are right.) → Admittedly, homework can build independent study habits; however, the same habits can be built through optional projects that students actually choose.Prompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
- Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Students should be allowed to use AI tools for homework." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → Critics are right that AI can be used to avoid thinking; however, clear rules and assignments that ask students to explain their process can turn it into a tool for learning. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → yes, it is correctPrompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Homework should be optional in secondary school." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → Admittedly, homework can build independent study habits; however, the same habits can be built through optional projects that students actually choose. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → yes, it is correctPrompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
- Claim: "Professional athletes should be role models." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? (Athletes are famous. / Granted, athletes did not ask to be role models, so they shouldn't be. / Granted, athletes did not ask to be role models; nevertheless, their huge influence on young fans brings a responsibility they cannot simply ignore. / All athletes are bad role models.) → Granted, athletes did not ask to be role models; nevertheless, their huge influence on young fans brings a responsibility they cannot simply ignore.Prompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-12.
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