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English lesson plan · 12th grade (Year 13 in England) · 45 minutes

Writing a concession and rebuttal

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CCSS W.11-12.1.BCCSS W.11-12.1.CEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5England: AP Language (argument essay)England: A-level Extended Project

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Writing a concession and rebuttal.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 5 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Libraries are still essential in the digital age." Counterclaim: "Everything is online now." Which is the best rebuttal? → Books smell nice. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: A counterclaim states the opposing view; a rebuttal answers it.
  2. Which part of the Toulmin model matches this description? The position the arguer wants the audience to accept. (claim / grounds / backing / qualifier) → claimPrompt: Ask what job each part does: state, prove, connect, support the connection, limit, or admit exceptions.
  3. Claim: "Our town should build a skate park." Which sentence is a COUNTERCLAIM? (Opening hours could end at 8 pm to limit noise. / Some residents worry that a skate park would bring noise late at night. / A survey found 300 young people would use it weekly. / Skating builds balance and confidence.) → Some residents worry that a skate park would bring noise late at night.Prompt: A counterclaim states the opposing view; a rebuttal answers it.

Hook · 5 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Writing a concession and rebuttal. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 10 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Claim: "Schools should teach financial literacy." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it?
  • Step 1: Concede (admittedly, although, granted, it is true that) and then rebut (however, yet, nevertheless) to show fairness and strengthen your case.
  • Step 2: It accepts the time problem but shows the benefit outweighs it.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades.
  • Answer: It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 10 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Claim: "Schools should teach financial literacy." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? (Everyone should be rich. / It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades. / The timetable is crowded, so we cannot teach anything new. / Money is important.) → It is true that the timetable is crowded, yet a few lessons a year on budgeting could save students from costly mistakes for decades.Prompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
  2. Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Professional athletes should be role models." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → Granted, athletes did not ask to be role models; nevertheless, their huge influence on young fans brings a responsibility they cannot simply ignore. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → yes, it is correctPrompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.

You do: independent practice · 10 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 5 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Claim: "Museums should be free for everyone." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? (While free entry costs money, money is not important at all. / Free entry is good because free things are good. / While free entry costs money to fund, it pays back by attracting visitors who spend in cafés, shops and the wider city. / Museums are full of old things.) → While free entry costs money to fund, it pays back by attracting visitors who spend in cafés, shops and the wider city.Prompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.
  2. Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Homework should be optional in secondary school." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → Homework should be optional because I said so. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: A good concession admits something genuinely true about the other side.

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Counterclaims and rebuttals in arguments.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Writing a concession and rebuttal

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  1. Question 1

    Claim: "Professional athletes should be role models." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it?

    • A. All athletes are bad role models.
    • B. Granted, athletes did not ask to be role models, so they shouldn't be.
    • C. Athletes are famous.
    • D. Granted, athletes did not ask to be role models; nevertheless, their huge influence on young fans brings a responsibility they cannot simply ignore.
  2. Question 2

    Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Museums should be free for everyone." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → While free entry costs money, money is not important at all.

    • A. yes, it is correct
    • B. no, it is not correct
  3. Question 3

    Claim: "Museums should be free for everyone." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it?

    • A. While free entry costs money, money is not important at all.
    • B. Free entry is good because free things are good.
    • C. While free entry costs money to fund, it pays back by attracting visitors who spend in cafés, shops and the wider city.
    • D. Museums are full of old things.
  4. Question 4

    Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Schools should teach financial literacy." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → Everyone should be rich.

    • A. yes, it is correct
    • B. no, it is not correct
  5. Question 5

    Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Professional athletes should be role models." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → Granted, athletes did not ask to be role models; nevertheless, their huge influence on young fans brings a responsibility they cannot simply ignore.

    • A. yes, it is correct
    • B. no, it is not correct
  6. Question 6

    Claim: "Homework should be optional in secondary school." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it?

    • A. Some people think homework is good, and they are right.
    • B. Homework is boring and nobody likes it.
    • C. Admittedly, homework can build independent study habits; however, the same habits can be built through optional projects that students actually choose.
    • D. Homework should be optional because I said so.
  7. Question 7

    Is the proposed answer correct? Claim: "Homework should be optional in secondary school." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it? → Admittedly, homework can build independent study habits; however, the same habits can be built through optional projects that students actually choose.

    • A. yes, it is correct
    • B. no, it is not correct
  8. Question 8

    Claim: "Cities should ban cars from their historic centres." Which sentence best concedes a point and then rebuts it?

    • A. Cars are noisy.
    • B. Although some shops fear losing customers, several cities found that footfall actually rose after their centres went car-free.
    • C. Although some shops fear losing customers, they are right, so we should not ban cars.
    • D. Shopkeepers are always wrong about everything.

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Answer key: Writing a concession and rebuttal

  1. 1. D. Granted, athletes did not ask to be role models; nevertheless, their huge influence on young fans brings a responsibility they cannot simply ignore.

  2. 2. B. no, it is not correct

  3. 3. C. While free entry costs money to fund, it pays back by attracting visitors who spend in cafés, shops and the wider city.

  4. 4. B. no, it is not correct

  5. 5. A. yes, it is correct

  6. 6. C. Admittedly, homework can build independent study habits; however, the same habits can be built through optional projects that students actually choose.

  7. 7. A. yes, it is correct

  8. 8. B. Although some shops fear losing customers, several cities found that footfall actually rose after their centres went car-free.