• Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Style, tone and word choice (ACT English); Formal register and tone). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
• Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.

1. A travel article aims to evoke the atmosphere of a night market: "There were a lot of people and some food." Which revision best achieves the writer's goal? (Crowds jostled between stalls where skewers hissed over glowing coals. / People were there. Food was there too. / The market had people in it, plus food. / There were many people and also some food items.) → Crowds jostled between stalls where skewers hissed over glowing coals.Prompt: Who is the audience and what is the purpose?
2. Letter to the head teacher about a new club. Which sentence is most appropriate? (I am writing to propose a new coding club for Year 7 pupils. / Yo, can we get a coding club or what? / Coding club. Need it. Now. / Hey! So I've got this cool idea for a club.) → I am writing to propose a new coding club for Year 7 pupils.Prompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose?
3. A report on a charity's work: "The charity helped a whole bunch of families with stuff." Which revision is most precise? (The charity helped heaps of families with various stuff. / The charity was helpful to families in lots of ways and stuff. / The charity provided food and housing support to 340 families. / The charity helped many families with things.) → The charity provided food and housing support to 340 families.Prompt: Who is the audience and what is the purpose?

• Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
• Share the objective: Adapting register and tone to audience and purpose. Read the success criteria together.

• Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
• Example: Purpose: an email to a company complaining that a product broke after one week. Which sentence suits the audience and purpose best?
• Step 1: Effective writers adapt register — formality, vocabulary and tone — to their audience and purpose.
• Step 2: Firm, polite and specific is most effective for a complaint.
• Step 3: So the answer is: I am writing to report that the headphones I bought on 3 May stopped working after one week, and I would like a replacement or refund.
• Answer: I am writing to report that the headphones I bought on 3 May stopped working after one week, and I would like a replacement or refund.
• Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

• Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
• Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.

1. Is the proposed answer correct? Purpose: a post for your friends' group chat inviting them to a beach clean-up. Which version suits the audience and purpose best? → The beach will be cleaned. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose (request, inform, persuade, entertain)?
2. Purpose: a speech to Year 7 pupils encouraging them to join the reading club. Which line suits the audience and purpose best? (The reading club operates in accordance with library regulations. / Imagine travelling to a new world every week without leaving your chair — that's what our reading club offers. / Notwithstanding prior commitments, attendance is encouraged. / Reading club. Tuesdays. Be there.) → Imagine travelling to a new world every week without leaving your chair — that's what our reading club offers.Prompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose (request, inform, persuade, entertain)?

• Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
• Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

• Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.

1. Is the proposed answer correct? Purpose: a post for your friends' group chat inviting them to a beach clean-up. Which version suits the audience and purpose best? → The beach will be cleaned. (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose (request, inform, persuade, entertain)?
2. Purpose: a speech to Year 7 pupils encouraging them to join the reading club. Which line suits the audience and purpose best? (Imagine travelling to a new world every week without leaving your chair — that's what our reading club offers. / Reading club. Tuesdays. Be there. / Notwithstanding prior commitments, attendance is encouraged. / The reading club operates in accordance with library regulations.) → Imagine travelling to a new world every week without leaving your chair — that's what our reading club offers.Prompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose (request, inform, persuade, entertain)?

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-12.