English lesson plan · 8th grade (Year 9 in England) · 30 minutes
Rewriting passive sentences in the active voice
Grammar
CCSS L.8.1.BCCSS L.8.3.AEngland: KS3 English (grammar)England: GCSE English Language (AO6)England: ACT English (style)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Rewriting passive sentences in the active voice.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Active and passive voice
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: Sentence strips, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Active and passive voice). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which sentence is the passive version of this sentence? Maya wrote the poem. • The poem was written by Maya. • The poem wrote Maya. • The poem was wrote by Maya. • Maya was written by the poem. (The poem was written by Maya. / The poem wrote Maya. / The poem was wrote by Maya. / Maya was written by the poem.) → The poem was written by Maya.Prompt: In a passive sentence, the thing the action is done TO becomes the subject.
- Is this sentence active or passive? Scientists discovered a new species of beetle. (active / passive) → activePrompt: Who or what is the subject? Is the subject DOING the action or RECEIVING it?
- Choose the best answer. Which sentence puts the focus on the painting rather than on the painter? (In 1890 the artist completed it. / The artist, in 1890, completed the painting. / The painting was completed in 1890. / The artist completed the painting in 1890.) → The painting was completed in 1890.Prompt: The passive voice lets a writer leave out the doer or put the focus on what was affected.
Hook · 3 min
- Show a sentence with the grammar point used wrongly and ask what sounds odd.
- Share the objective: Rewriting passive sentences in the active voice. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which sentence is the correct active version, keeping the same tense? The match was won by our team. • The match won our team. • Our team wins the match by it. • Our team was won by the match. • Our team won the match.
- Step 1: To make a sentence active, move the 'by' phrase to the front as the subject and change be + past participle to the matching active form.
- Step 2: So the answer is: Our team won the match.
- Answer: Our team won the match.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which sentence is the correct active version, keeping the same tense? The thief was caught by a security guard. • A security guard was caught by the thief. • A security guard catches the thief. • The thief caught a security guard. • A security guard caught the thief. (A security guard was caught by the thief. / A security guard catches the thief. / The thief caught a security guard. / A security guard caught the thief.) → A security guard caught the thief.Prompt: Who did the action? That person or thing becomes the subject.
- This sentence is passive. Who or what actually does the action? Type it (or type 'nobody' if the doer isn't named). The prize was presented by a famous author. → a famous authorPrompt: Look for the 'by…' phrase.
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Which sentence is the correct active version, keeping the same tense? Mistakes were made by the referee. • The referee was made by mistakes. • Mistakes made the referee. • The referee made mistakes. • The referee makes mistakes. (The referee was made by mistakes. / Mistakes made the referee. / The referee made mistakes. / The referee makes mistakes.) → The referee made mistakes.Prompt: Who did the action? That person or thing becomes the subject.
- This sentence is passive. Who or what actually does the action? Type it (or type 'nobody' if the doer isn't named). The results will be checked by two teachers. → two teachersPrompt: Look for the 'by…' phrase.
Watch out for
- Naming the feature but not using it in their own sentences.
- Thinking a sentence is right because it sounds right when spoken casually.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Active and passive voice.
- Use concrete materials: sentence strips.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-8.
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