English lesson plan · 6th grade (Year 7 in England) · 30 minutes
Fragments and run-on sentences
Writing & Editing
CCSS L.6.1CCSS L.4.1.FEngland: KS2 SATs GPSEngland: KS3 Writing
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Fragments and run-on sentences.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: What makes a sentence?; Combining sentences
Leads to: Concision: cutting wordiness and redundancy; Sentence boundaries (SAT/ACT); Spotting and fixing comma splices
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (What makes a sentence?; Combining sentences). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which one is a complete sentence? • Grandad grows tomatoes. • grandad grows • grows tomatoes • Grandad tomatoes. (Grandad grows tomatoes. / grandad grows / grows tomatoes / Grandad tomatoes.) → Grandad grows tomatoes.Prompt: A sentence needs someone or something AND what they do.
- Which is the best way to join these sentences? Leo practised every day. He won the competition. • Leo practised every day although he won the competition. • Leo practised every day or he won the competition. • Leo practised every day, so he won the competition. • Leo practised every day, he won the competition. (Leo practised every day although he won the competition. / Leo practised every day or he won the competition. / Leo practised every day, so he won the competition. / Leo practised every day, he won the competition.) → Leo practised every day, so he won the competition.Prompt: How are the two ideas linked: adding, contrasting, giving a reason, or a result?
- Which one is a complete sentence? • a fox ran into • ran into the woods • A fox into the woods. • A fox ran into the woods. (a fox ran into / ran into the woods / A fox into the woods. / A fox ran into the woods.) → A fox ran into the woods.Prompt: A sentence needs someone or something AND what they do.
Hook · 3 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Fragments and run-on sentences. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The bus was late, we missed the start of the film.
- Step 1: A fragment lacks a main clause. A run-on (or comma splice) joins two main clauses without proper punctuation or a conjunction.
- Step 2: So the answer is: run-on
- Answer: run-on
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? I love swimming it is the thing I enjoy most. (fragment / run-on / correct sentence) → run-onPrompt: Does it have a main clause (a subject and verb that can stand alone)?
- Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? The bus was late, so we missed the start of the film. (fragment / run-on / correct sentence) → correct sentencePrompt: Does it have a main clause (a subject and verb that can stand alone)?
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? Because the bus was late. (fragment / run-on / correct sentence) → fragmentPrompt: Does it have a main clause (a subject and verb that can stand alone)?
- Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a correct sentence? My brother plays the drums, and my sister plays the flute. (fragment / run-on / correct sentence) → correct sentencePrompt: Does it have a main clause (a subject and verb that can stand alone)?
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: What makes a sentence?.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Concision: cutting wordiness and redundancy; Sentence boundaries (SAT/ACT); Spotting and fixing comma splices.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-6.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder