English lesson plan · 11th grade (Year 12 in England) · 30 minutes
Rhetorical devices of syntax: anaphora, antithesis, chiasmus, asyndeton…
Reading Comprehension
CCSS RI.11-12.6CCSS L.11-12.3.AEngland: AP LanguageEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q3England: A-level English Language
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Rhetorical devices of syntax: anaphora, antithesis, chiasmus, asyndeton….
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: The effect of sentence forms: short sentences, fragments, lists, questions; Ethos, pathos or logos?; Euphemism, oxymoron, paradox and understatement
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: A short text or extract (one copy each), Highlighters, Question cards, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (The effect of sentence forms: short sentences, fragments, lists, questions; Ethos, pathos or logos?; Euphemism, oxymoron, paradox and understatement). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Is the proposed answer correct? "As the sun sank slowly behind the hills, casting long golden shadows across the fields where the cows grazed peacefully, the village settled into its evening calm." What is the effect of the long sentence? → it creates a slow, peaceful rhythm that matches the calm scene (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → yes, it is correctPrompt: How does the length or shape of the sentence affect the pace?
- Which figure of speech matches this description? Two contradictory words placed directly together. (paradox / oxymoron / understatement / euphemism) → oxymoronPrompt: Ask: does it soften, combine opposites in two words, seem self-contradictory as a whole idea, or downplay?
- Read the question and choose. "How would you feel if your home disappeared overnight?" What does the question do? (it asks for a factual answer / it makes readers imagine the situation personally / it shows the writer is confused / it ends the argument) → it makes readers imagine the situation personallyPrompt: How does the length or shape of the sentence affect the pace?
Hook · 3 min
- Read the first lines of a short text aloud and ask what students predict will happen and why.
- Share the objective: Rhetorical devices of syntax: anaphora, antithesis, chiasmus, asyndeton…. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which rhetorical device matches this description? Repeating the same word or phrase at the START of successive clauses.
- Step 1: Speakers and writers shape sentences for effect: repetition (anaphora, epistrophe), balance and contrast (antithesis, chiasmus), pace (asyndeton, polysyndeton) and understatement (litotes).
- Step 2: anaphora: Repeating the same word or phrase at the START of successive clauses.
- Step 3: So the answer is: anaphora
- Answer: anaphora
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which rhetorical device matches this description? Leaving out conjunctions between items in a list, for speed or force. (epistrophe / chiasmus / litotes / asyndeton) → asyndetonPrompt: Is it about repetition (where?), contrast, reversed order, conjunctions, or denying the opposite?
- Which rhetorical device is used here? They took our fields, they took our homes, they took our hope. (chiasmus / asyndeton / anaphora / epistrophe) → epistrophePrompt: Look for repeated words: at the start, at the end, or reversed?
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Which rhetorical device is used here? We ran and we climbed and we swam and we laughed until the sun went down. (antithesis / litotes / polysyndeton / epistrophe) → polysyndetonPrompt: Look for repeated words: at the start, at the end, or reversed?
- Which rhetorical device matches this description? Understatement that expresses an idea by denying its opposite. (anaphora / antithesis / litotes / asyndeton) → litotesPrompt: Is it about repetition (where?), contrast, reversed order, conjunctions, or denying the opposite?
Watch out for
- Answering from memory or opinion instead of evidence in the text.
- Copying a long quote without explaining what it shows.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: The effect of sentence forms: short sentences, fragments, lists, questions.
- Use concrete materials: a short text or extract (one copy each).
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-11.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder