English lesson plan · 11th grade (Year 12 in England) · 30 minutes
Rhetorical devices of syntax: anaphora, antithesis, chiasmus, asyndeton…
Reading Comprehension
CCSS RI.11-12.6CCSS L.11-12.3.AEngland: AP LanguageEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q3England: A-level English Language
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Rhetorical devices of syntax: anaphora, antithesis, chiasmus, asyndeton….
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: The effect of sentence forms: short sentences, fragments, lists, questions; Ethos, pathos or logos?; Euphemism, oxymoron, paradox and understatement
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: A short text or extract (one copy each), Highlighters, Question cards, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (The effect of sentence forms: short sentences, fragments, lists, questions; Ethos, pathos or logos?; Euphemism, oxymoron, paradox and understatement). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Is the proposed answer correct? "The market sold spices, silks, copper pots, caged birds, glass beads, ripe figs and a hundred other treasures." What is the effect of the long list? → it shows the market was empty (yes, it is correct / no, it is not correct) → no, it is not correctPrompt: How does the length or shape of the sentence affect the pace?
- Which figure of speech matches this description? A mild or indirect phrase used instead of a harsh or uncomfortable one. (euphemism / oxymoron / paradox / understatement) → euphemismPrompt: Ask: does it soften, combine opposites in two words, seem self-contradictory as a whole idea, or downplay?
- Read the question and choose. "The market sold spices, silks, copper pots, caged birds, glass beads, ripe figs and a hundred other treasures." What is the effect of the long list? (it creates suspense / it slows the story to a stop / it shows the overwhelming variety and abundance / it shows the market was empty) → it shows the overwhelming variety and abundancePrompt: How does the length or shape of the sentence affect the pace?
Hook · 3 min
- Read the first lines of a short text aloud and ask what students predict will happen and why.
- Share the objective: Rhetorical devices of syntax: anaphora, antithesis, chiasmus, asyndeton…. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which rhetorical device matches this description? Repeating the same word or phrase at the START of successive clauses.
- Step 1: Speakers and writers shape sentences for effect: repetition (anaphora, epistrophe), balance and contrast (antithesis, chiasmus), pace (asyndeton, polysyndeton) and understatement (litotes).
- Step 2: anaphora: Repeating the same word or phrase at the START of successive clauses.
- Step 3: So the answer is: anaphora
- Answer: anaphora
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which rhetorical device matches this description? Repeating the same word or phrase at the START of successive clauses. (litotes / polysyndeton / chiasmus / anaphora) → anaphoraPrompt: Is it about repetition (where?), contrast, reversed order, conjunctions, or denying the opposite?
- Which rhetorical device is used here? We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing. (epistrophe / polysyndeton / chiasmus / asyndeton) → chiasmusPrompt: Look for repeated words: at the start, at the end, or reversed?
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Which rhetorical device matches this description? Repeating the same word or phrase at the START of successive clauses. (anaphora / chiasmus / polysyndeton / epistrophe) → anaphoraPrompt: Is it about repetition (where?), contrast, reversed order, conjunctions, or denying the opposite?
- Type the rhetorical device (in English) that matches this description. Placing contrasting ideas side by side in balanced phrases. → antithesisPrompt: Is it about repetition (where?), contrast, reversed order, conjunctions, or denying the opposite?
Watch out for
- Answering from memory or opinion instead of evidence in the text.
- Copying a long quote without explaining what it shows.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: The effect of sentence forms: short sentences, fragments, lists, questions.
- Use concrete materials: a short text or extract (one copy each).
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-11.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder