English lesson plan · 6th grade (Year 7 in England) · 30 minutes
Choosing the best topic sentence
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.6.2.ACCSS W.6.1.AEngland: KS3 Writing (paragraphing)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Choosing the best topic sentence.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Main idea and supporting details
Leads to: Choosing the detail that best supports a point
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Main idea and supporting details). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Sloths move very slowly. They hang upside down in trees for most of the day. They even sleep and eat upside down. Moving slowly helps them save energy. What is the main idea? (Sloths sleep a lot. / Sloths live slow, upside-down lives in trees. / Trees are tall. / Sloths eat leaves.) → Sloths live slow, upside-down lives in trees.Prompt: What is the WHOLE text mostly about, not just one part?
- Exercise is good for your body and your mind. It makes your heart and muscles stronger. It can also help you sleep better and feel happier. What is the main idea? (Running is fun. / Muscles are strong. / Exercise has many benefits. / Sleep is important.) → Exercise has many benefits.Prompt: What is the WHOLE text mostly about, not just one part?
- Long ago, people did not have fridges. They kept food cold in cellars, packed it in ice, or dried and salted meat so it would last. What is the main idea? (People once used other ways to keep food from spoiling. / Cellars are dark. / Fridges are expensive. / Salt makes food tasty.) → People once used other ways to keep food from spoiling.Prompt: What is the WHOLE text mostly about, not just one part?
Hook · 3 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Choosing the best topic sentence. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: ___ Walking or cycling saves money, keeps you fit and reduces traffic outside the school gates. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph?
- Step 1: A topic sentence states the main point of a paragraph, and every other sentence supports it.
- Step 2: So the answer is: There are good reasons to walk or cycle to school.
- Answer: There are good reasons to walk or cycle to school.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- ___ Octopuses can open jars, escape from tanks and even recognise individual people. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (The sea is very deep. / Jars can be hard to open. / Octopuses have eight arms. / Octopuses are among the cleverest animals in the sea.) → Octopuses are among the cleverest animals in the sea.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?
- Topic sentence: "The school should open a games club at lunchtime." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (It would give quieter students somewhere to go. / Several teachers have already offered to help. / Board games build problem-solving skills. / Chess was probably invented in India.) → Chess was probably invented in India.Prompt: Reread the topic sentence. What is the paragraph promising to discuss?
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Topic sentence: "Video calls helped many families stay close while living far apart." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (Grandparents could see grandchildren every week. / The first telephone call was made in 1876. / Cousins in different countries played games together online. / Families shared birthdays on screen.) → The first telephone call was made in 1876.Prompt: Reread the topic sentence. What is the paragraph promising to discuss?
- ___ Many apps use bright notifications, endless scrolling and rewards to keep users coming back. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Phones have screens. / Scrolling is a word for moving down a page. / Notifications can be turned off in settings. / Many apps are deliberately designed to hold our attention.) → Many apps are deliberately designed to hold our attention.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Main idea and supporting details.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Choosing the detail that best supports a point.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-6.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder