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English lesson plan · 12th grade (Year 13 in England) · 30 minutes

Is it an arguable thesis?

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CCSS W.11-12.1.ACCSS W.11-12.2.AEngland: A-level English (essay writing)England: AP Language and LiteratureEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Is it an arguable thesis?.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Thesis statements and supporting evidence; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 4 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Thesis statements and supporting evidence; The Toulmin model: claim, grounds, warrant, backing, qualifier, rebuttal). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which part of the Toulmin model matches this description? The conditions under which the claim might not hold, or the answer to an objection. (backing / rebuttal / claim / qualifier) → rebuttalPrompt: Ask what job each part does: state, prove, connect, support the connection, limit, or admit exceptions.
  2. Topic: Is social media good for young people? Which is the strongest thesis statement? (I will talk about social media. / Social media is a thing many people use. / While social media can connect young people, its effects on sleep, attention and self-esteem mean that its use should be limited. / There are lots of apps.) → While social media can connect young people, its effects on sleep, attention and self-esteem mean that its use should be limited.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.
  3. Which part of a Toulmin argument is this sentence? Studies from cities in several countries show that protected lanes cut cycling injuries. (claim / grounds / backing / qualifier) → backingPrompt: Is it the position itself, a piece of evidence, the link between them, support for that link, a limiting word like 'in most cases', or an 'unless'?

Hook · 3 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Is it an arguable thesis?. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 7 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? This essay is about the novel 'Frankenstein'.
  • Step 1: A strong thesis is arguable, specific and often previews its reasons; facts, vague generalisations and topic announcements are not theses.
  • Step 2: It announces the subject only.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: an announcement of the topic
  • Answer: an announcement of the topic
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 6 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? The voting age should be lowered to sixteen because sixteen-year-olds already work, pay tax and can make informed choices. (arguable, specific thesis / just a fact / too broad or vague / an announcement of the topic) → arguable, specific thesisPrompt: Could a reasonable person disagree with it? If not, it's a fact or an announcement.
  2. Which statement is this: just a fact? (Shakespeare is a very important writer. / Social media has changed the way teenagers communicate. / Electric cars produce no exhaust emissions while driving.) → Electric cars produce no exhaust emissions while driving.Prompt: Could a reasonable person disagree with it? If not, it's a fact or an announcement.

You do: independent practice · 7 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 3 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? Schools should replace one hour of screen time a day with outdoor learning, because it improves both concentration and wellbeing. (arguable, specific thesis / just a fact / too broad or vague / an announcement of the topic) → arguable, specific thesisPrompt: Could a reasonable person disagree with it? If not, it's a fact or an announcement.
  2. Which statement is this: an announcement of the topic? (In Macbeth, Shakespeare presents ambition not as a personal flaw alone but as a force encouraged by the people around Macbeth, especially his wife. / Social media has changed the way teenagers communicate. / This essay is about the novel 'Frankenstein'.) → This essay is about the novel 'Frankenstein'.Prompt: Could a reasonable person disagree with it? If not, it's a fact or an announcement.

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Thesis statements and supporting evidence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-12.

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Is it an arguable thesis?

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  1. Question 1

    Which statement is this: arguable, specific thesis?

    • A. The voting age should be lowered to sixteen because sixteen-year-olds already work, pay tax and can make informed choices.
    • B. Shakespeare is a very important writer.
    • C. Electric cars produce no exhaust emissions while driving.
  2. Question 2

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? This essay is about the novel 'Frankenstein'.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic
  3. Question 3

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? The voting age should be lowered to sixteen because sixteen-year-olds already work, pay tax and can make informed choices.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic
  4. Question 4

    Which statement is this: too broad or vague?

    • A. Cities should prioritise protected cycle lanes over new car parks, because they reduce congestion and pollution at lower cost.
    • B. Social media has changed the way teenagers communicate.
    • C. In this essay I will talk about climate change.
  5. Question 5

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? In Macbeth, Shakespeare presents ambition not as a personal flaw alone but as a force encouraged by the people around Macbeth, especially his wife.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic
  6. Question 6

    What kind of statement is this, as the thesis of an essay? Social media has changed the way teenagers communicate.

    • A. arguable, specific thesis
    • B. just a fact
    • C. too broad or vague
    • D. an announcement of the topic

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Answer key: Is it an arguable thesis?

  1. 1. A. The voting age should be lowered to sixteen because sixteen-year-olds already work, pay tax and can make informed choices.

  2. 2. D. an announcement of the topic

  3. 3. A. arguable, specific thesis

  4. 4. B. Social media has changed the way teenagers communicate.

  5. 5. A. arguable, specific thesis

  6. 6. C. too broad or vague