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12th grade (Year 13 in England) · 16 questions · Common Core: W.11-12.1.D, W.11-12.2.E · England: A-level English Language, University preparation
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Question 1
"We analysed the data and we found that prices went up a lot when the factory shut." Which revision uses nominalisation to sound more formal and concise?
- A. The data was analysed by us and we found prices went up a lot.
- B. Analysis of the data revealed a sharp price increase following the factory's closure.
- C. Prices, when the factory shut, went up, we found, a lot.
- D. We looked at the data and prices went up loads when the factory shut.
Question 2
"This proves that social media causes loneliness." (The evidence is a single correlational survey.) Which revision uses appropriate hedging?
- A. This totally proves social media causes loneliness.
- B. Nobody could ever disagree that social media causes loneliness.
- C. These findings suggest a possible link between social media use and loneliness.
- D. Social media definitely makes everyone lonely.
Question 3
"I think the poet is really sad because her dad died." Which revision is most appropriate for an academic literary essay?
- A. The poet is super sad, I feel.
- B. The poem's imagery conveys the speaker's grief following a parent's death.
- C. I reckon the poet is sad about her dad.
- D. Basically the poem is just about being sad.
Question 4
"I think the poet is really sad because her dad died." Which revision is most appropriate for an academic literary essay?
- A. The poet is super sad, I feel.
- B. Basically the poem is just about being sad.
- C. The poem's imagery conveys the speaker's grief following a parent's death.
- D. I reckon the poet is sad about her dad.
Question 5
"This proves that social media causes loneliness." (The evidence is a single correlational survey.) Which revision uses appropriate hedging?
- A. Nobody could ever disagree that social media causes loneliness.
- B. Social media definitely makes everyone lonely.
- C. This totally proves social media causes loneliness.
- D. These findings suggest a possible link between social media use and loneliness.
Question 6
"Everyone knows that homework is pointless." Which revision is most objective?
- A. Everyone knows homework is completely pointless.
- B. It's a fact that homework never works.
- C. Some studies have questioned the value of homework for younger pupils.
- D. Homework is obviously useless, as anyone can see.
Question 7
"Everyone knows that homework is pointless." Which revision is most objective?
- A. Homework is obviously useless, as anyone can see.
- B. Some studies have questioned the value of homework for younger pupils.
- C. Everyone knows homework is completely pointless.
- D. It's a fact that homework never works.
Question 8
"We analysed the data and we found that prices went up a lot when the factory shut." Which revision uses nominalisation to sound more formal and concise?
- A. Prices, when the factory shut, went up, we found, a lot.
- B. We looked at the data and prices went up loads when the factory shut.
- C. The data was analysed by us and we found prices went up a lot.
- D. Analysis of the data revealed a sharp price increase following the factory's closure.
Question 9
"We analysed the data and we found that prices went up a lot when the factory shut." Which revision uses nominalisation to sound more formal and concise?
- A. We looked at the data and prices went up loads when the factory shut.
- B. Prices, when the factory shut, went up, we found, a lot.
- C. The data was analysed by us and we found prices went up a lot.
- D. Analysis of the data revealed a sharp price increase following the factory's closure.
Question 10
"This proves that social media causes loneliness." (The evidence is a single correlational survey.) Which revision uses appropriate hedging?
- A. These findings suggest a possible link between social media use and loneliness.
- B. This totally proves social media causes loneliness.
- C. Nobody could ever disagree that social media causes loneliness.
- D. Social media definitely makes everyone lonely.
Question 11
"We analysed the data and we found that prices went up a lot when the factory shut." Which revision uses nominalisation to sound more formal and concise?
- A. Prices, when the factory shut, went up, we found, a lot.
- B. We looked at the data and prices went up loads when the factory shut.
- C. Analysis of the data revealed a sharp price increase following the factory's closure.
- D. The data was analysed by us and we found prices went up a lot.
Question 12
"We analysed the data and we found that prices went up a lot when the factory shut." Which revision uses nominalisation to sound more formal and concise?
- A. The data was analysed by us and we found prices went up a lot.
- B. Analysis of the data revealed a sharp price increase following the factory's closure.
- C. Prices, when the factory shut, went up, we found, a lot.
- D. We looked at the data and prices went up loads when the factory shut.
Question 13
"Everyone knows that homework is pointless." Which revision is most objective?
- A. Homework is obviously useless, as anyone can see.
- B. Everyone knows homework is completely pointless.
- C. Some studies have questioned the value of homework for younger pupils.
- D. It's a fact that homework never works.
Question 14
"Everyone knows that homework is pointless." Which revision is most objective?
- A. Homework is obviously useless, as anyone can see.
- B. Everyone knows homework is completely pointless.
- C. Some studies have questioned the value of homework for younger pupils.
- D. It's a fact that homework never works.
Question 15
"I think the poet is really sad because her dad died." Which revision is most appropriate for an academic literary essay?
- A. I reckon the poet is sad about her dad.
- B. Basically the poem is just about being sad.
- C. The poet is super sad, I feel.
- D. The poem's imagery conveys the speaker's grief following a parent's death.
Question 16
"This proves that social media causes loneliness." (The evidence is a single correlational survey.) Which revision uses appropriate hedging?
- A. This totally proves social media causes loneliness.
- B. These findings suggest a possible link between social media use and loneliness.
- C. Social media definitely makes everyone lonely.
- D. Nobody could ever disagree that social media causes loneliness.
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