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English lesson plan · 5th grade (Year 6 in England) · 60 minutes

Choose the strongest conclusion

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.5.1.DCCSS W.5.2.EEngland: Y5/6 Writing (endings)England: Y5/6 Writing (composition)

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Choose the strongest conclusion.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Choose the best concluding sentence; Choose the best summary of a short text

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 6 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choose the best concluding sentence; Choose the best summary of a short text). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which sentence sounds most like a CONCLUDING sentence? (Some people cycle to work. / All in all, cycling is a fun way to stay healthy. / Bikes have two wheels. / My bike is green.) → All in all, cycling is a fun way to stay healthy.Prompt: Concluding sentences often begin with words like In conclusion, All in all, Overall, So or That is why.
  2. Wind turbines turn moving air into electricity. The wind spins the blades, which turn a generator inside the tower. Wind power does not burn fuel, so it does not release smoke, but turbines only work when the wind blows. Which is the best summary? (Wind turbines are the best invention ever. / There is a generator in the tower. / Wind turbines use spinning blades to make clean electricity, but only when it is windy. / Turbines have blades.) → Wind turbines use spinning blades to make clean electricity, but only when it is windy.Prompt: A summary is short and covers the WHOLE text, not just one part.
  3. Our school should have a reading den. It would give us a quiet place to read at lunchtime. It would also help younger children love books. Which sentence would make the best ending? (I like football too. / Some books have pictures. / That is why a reading den would make our school even better. / Lunch is at twelve o'clock.) → That is why a reading den would make our school even better.Prompt: A concluding sentence wraps up the whole paragraph.

Hook · 6 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Choose the strongest conclusion. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 12 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Bees pollinate many of the crops we eat. Sadly, in many places their numbers are falling. The good news is that people can help by planting flowers and avoiding pesticides. Which is the strongest conclusion for this article?
  • Step 1: Strong conclusions sum up, reflect or call the reader to act; weak ones just stop or add random facts.
  • Step 2: So the answer is: Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.
  • Answer: Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 12 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. What kind of ending is this? As the sun set, Mia smiled; she knew she would never fear the dark again. (sums up the main points / calls the reader to act / reflects on a feeling or lesson) → reflects on a feeling or lessonPrompt: Does it tell the reader to do something, sum up facts, or show what a character feels or learned?
  2. Sam had always been scared of the sea. All summer he took swimming lessons, one nervous length at a time. On the last day of the holiday, he swam out to the rocks beside his sister. Which is the strongest ending for this story? (The sea is made of salt water. / As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more. / And that was the story of Sam. / Then Sam went home and had dinner.) → As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more.Prompt: A good ending links back to the main idea or the beginning.

You do: independent practice · 17 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 7 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Sam had always been scared of the sea. All summer he took swimming lessons, one nervous length at a time. On the last day of the holiday, he swam out to the rocks beside his sister. Which is the strongest ending for this story? (Then Sam went home and had dinner. / The sea is made of salt water. / And that was the story of Sam. / As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more.) → As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more.Prompt: A good ending links back to the main idea or the beginning.
  2. What kind of ending is this? Turn off the tap while you brush your teeth, and save water every day. (sums up the main points / calls the reader to act / reflects on a feeling or lesson) → calls the reader to actPrompt: Does it tell the reader to do something, sum up facts, or show what a character feels or learned?

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Choose the best concluding sentence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-5.

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Choose the strongest conclusion

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  1. Question 1

    What kind of ending is this? In short, bees pollinate our crops, make honey and keep wild plants growing.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  2. Question 2

    At the science fair, Ana's robot kept dropping the blocks. She checked every part and finally found one loose wire. She fixed it, pressed start, and the robot sorted every block perfectly. Which is the strongest ending for this story?

    • A. Robots need electricity.
    • B. Then everyone went home.
    • C. Ana grinned at the little robot. One tiny wire had taught her the biggest lesson: never give up.
    • D. The science fair was in the hall.
  3. Question 3

    What kind of ending is this? Kai hugged his new dog and realised that home was wherever Pepper was.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  4. Question 4

    Bees pollinate many of the crops we eat. Sadly, in many places their numbers are falling. The good news is that people can help by planting flowers and avoiding pesticides. Which is the strongest conclusion for this article?

    • A. That is all I know about bees.
    • B. The end.
    • C. Bees are insects.
    • D. Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.
  5. Question 5

    What kind of ending is this? Overall, recycling saves energy, protects wildlife and reduces rubbish.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  6. Question 6

    What kind of ending is this? Sam looked back at the mountain. It had been hard, but it had been worth it.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  7. Question 7

    What kind of ending is this? So next time you see a bee, thank it, and plant a flower for it.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  8. Question 8

    What kind of ending is this? To sum up, sleep helps us learn, grow and stay healthy.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson

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Answer key: Choose the strongest conclusion

  1. 1. A. sums up the main points

  2. 2. C. Ana grinned at the little robot. One tiny wire had taught her the biggest lesson: never give up.

  3. 3. C. reflects on a feeling or lesson

  4. 4. D. Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.

  5. 5. A. sums up the main points

  6. 6. C. reflects on a feeling or lesson

  7. 7. B. calls the reader to act

  8. 8. A. sums up the main points