English lesson plan · 10th grade (Year 11 in England) · 60 minutes
Modifier placement in complex sentences
Grammar
CCSS L.9-10.1England: SAT Standard English ConventionsEngland: ACT English
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Modifier placement in complex sentences.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Misplaced and dangling modifiers
Leads to: SAT/ACT Standard English Conventions (mixed); After an opening modifier, choose the right subject (SAT)
Materials: Sentence strips, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 6 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Misplaced and dangling modifiers). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which sentence is written correctly, with the describing words next to what they describe? • While walking home, a dog followed me. • While I was walking home, a dog followed me. • A dog followed me walking home, while. • Walking home, a dog followed me. (While walking home, a dog followed me. / While I was walking home, a dog followed me. / A dog followed me walking home, while. / Walking home, a dog followed me.) → While I was walking home, a dog followed me.Prompt: Look at the opening phrase. Who or what is doing that action?
- Which sentence is written correctly, with the describing words next to what they describe? • Covered in chocolate, the cake looked delicious. • Covered in chocolate, we ate the cake. • Covered in chocolate, I thought the cake looked delicious. • Covered in chocolate, the children loved the cake. (Covered in chocolate, the cake looked delicious. / Covered in chocolate, we ate the cake. / Covered in chocolate, I thought the cake looked delicious. / Covered in chocolate, the children loved the cake.) → Covered in chocolate, the cake looked delicious.Prompt: Look at the opening phrase. Who or what is doing that action?
- Which sentence is written correctly, with the describing words next to what they describe? • Running for the bus, Tom's keys were dropped. • Running for the bus, the keys fell out of Tom's pocket. • Tom's keys, running for the bus, dropped. • Running for the bus, Tom dropped his keys. (Running for the bus, Tom's keys were dropped. / Running for the bus, the keys fell out of Tom's pocket. / Tom's keys, running for the bus, dropped. / Running for the bus, Tom dropped his keys.) → Running for the bus, Tom dropped his keys.Prompt: Look at the opening phrase. Who or what is doing that action?
Hook · 6 min
- Show a sentence with the grammar point used wrongly and ask what sounds odd.
- Share the objective: Modifier placement in complex sentences. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 12 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Known for her bold colours, ___ Which choice completes the sentence correctly?
- Step 1: An introductory modifier describes the noun that comes straight after the comma.
- Step 2: The painter is known for bold colours, so 'the painter' follows the comma.
- Step 3: So the answer is: the painter filled the gallery with bright canvases.
- Answer: the painter filled the gallery with bright canvases.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 12 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Originally built as a grain store, ___ Which choice completes the sentence correctly? (a modern art gallery now fills the building. / visitors now enjoy modern art in the building. / the building now houses a modern art gallery. / the town converted the building into a gallery.) → the building now houses a modern art gallery.Prompt: Who or what does the opening phrase describe?
- Having studied the river for a decade, ___ Which choice completes the sentence correctly? (the salmon were seen returning by the biologist. / the return of the salmon was noticed. / the biologist noticed that the salmon were returning. / it became clear that the salmon were returning.) → the biologist noticed that the salmon were returning.Prompt: Who or what does the opening phrase describe?
You do: independent practice · 17 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 7 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- A pioneer of early computing, ___ Which choice completes the sentence correctly? (the notes of Ada Lovelace contain the first program. / the first computer program was written by Ada Lovelace. / Ada Lovelace wrote what many consider the first computer program. / many people consider Ada Lovelace's notes the first program.) → Ada Lovelace wrote what many consider the first computer program.Prompt: Who or what does the opening phrase describe?
- Unlike most reptiles, ___ Which choice completes the sentence correctly? (some lizards give birth to live young. / the young of some lizards are born live. / giving birth to live young is common in some lizards. / live young are born to some lizards.) → some lizards give birth to live young.Prompt: Who or what does the opening phrase describe?
Watch out for
- Naming the feature but not using it in their own sentences.
- Thinking a sentence is right because it sounds right when spoken casually.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Misplaced and dangling modifiers.
- Use concrete materials: sentence strips.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: SAT/ACT Standard English Conventions (mixed); After an opening modifier, choose the right subject (SAT).
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-10.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder