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English lesson plan · 10th grade (Year 11 in England) · 60 minutes

Thesis statements and supporting evidence

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CCSS W.9-10.1.ACCSS W.9-10.1.BEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5England: US argumentative essay

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Thesis statements and supporting evidence.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Topic sentences and paragraphs; Claims, reasons and evidence

Leads to: Academic style: hedging, nominalisation and objectivity; Is it an arguable thesis?

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 6 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Topic sentences and paragraphs; Claims, reasons and evidence). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. ___ It gives pupils exercise. It teaches teamwork. It also helps them make friends. Which is the best topic sentence? (Some pupils prefer reading. / Teamwork is a word. / Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils. / Football is played with a ball.) → Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
  2. Our town needs a skate park. Young people have nowhere safe to skate, so they use car parks, which is dangerous. A skate park would keep them safe and give them a place to meet. What reason does the writer give? (Skating is an Olympic sport. / Skaters currently use dangerous car parks. / Everyone in town skates. / Skate parks are cheap.) → Skaters currently use dangerous car parks.Prompt: What is the writer's main claim?
  3. ___ They can see in near darkness. Their soft feathers let them fly silently. Their sharp talons grip prey tightly. Which is the best topic sentence? (Owls are birds. / I saw an owl once. / Owls are well equipped for hunting at night. / Some birds eat seeds.) → Owls are well equipped for hunting at night.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?

Hook · 6 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Thesis statements and supporting evidence. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 12 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Thesis: The town should ban single-use plastic bags. Which sentence best acknowledges and answers a counterargument?
  • Step 1: Arguments need a clear thesis supported by relevant, credible evidence.
  • Step 2: So the answer is: Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves.
  • Answer: Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 12 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Thesis: Learning a second language benefits young children. Which is the most convincing supporting evidence? (Spanish is spoken in many countries. / Children like songs. / Languages have different alphabets. / Research suggests bilingual children often perform better on tasks requiring attention and switching between rules.) → Research suggests bilingual children often perform better on tasks requiring attention and switching between rules.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.
  2. Topic: Is social media good for young people? Which is the strongest thesis statement? (There are lots of apps. / I will talk about social media. / While social media can connect young people, its effects on sleep, attention and self-esteem mean that its use should be limited. / Social media is a thing many people use.) → While social media can connect young people, its effects on sleep, attention and self-esteem mean that its use should be limited.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.

You do: independent practice · 17 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 5 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 7 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Topic: Should schools start later in the morning? Which is the strongest thesis statement? (Sleep is important. / Schools should start later because teenagers' sleep patterns make early starts harmful to their learning and health. / Some schools start early and some start late. / This essay is about school start times.) → Schools should start later because teenagers' sleep patterns make early starts harmful to their learning and health.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.
  2. Thesis: Public parks are essential to healthy cities. Which is the most convincing supporting evidence? (Parks have trees. / Some parks have cafés. / My friend likes going to the park. / A study of ten cities found that residents living near parks reported 20% lower stress levels.) → A study of ten cities found that residents living near parks reported 20% lower stress levels.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Topic sentences and paragraphs.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Academic style: hedging, nominalisation and objectivity; Is it an arguable thesis?.
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Thesis statements and supporting evidence

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  1. Question 1

    Thesis: Public parks are essential to healthy cities. Which is the most convincing supporting evidence?

    • A. My friend likes going to the park.
    • B. Some parks have cafés.
    • C. Parks have trees.
    • D. A study of ten cities found that residents living near parks reported 20% lower stress levels.
  2. Question 2

    Topic: Should schools start later in the morning? Which is the strongest thesis statement?

    • A. Schools should start later because teenagers' sleep patterns make early starts harmful to their learning and health.
    • B. This essay is about school start times.
    • C. Some schools start early and some start late.
    • D. Sleep is important.
  3. Question 3

    Thesis: The town should ban single-use plastic bags. Which sentence best acknowledges and answers a counterargument?

    • A. Everyone agrees with me.
    • B. Plastic bags are bad.
    • C. Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves.
    • D. Bags can be blue or white.
  4. Question 4

    Topic: Is social media good for young people? Which is the strongest thesis statement?

    • A. Social media is a thing many people use.
    • B. I will talk about social media.
    • C. While social media can connect young people, its effects on sleep, attention and self-esteem mean that its use should be limited.
    • D. There are lots of apps.
  5. Question 5

    Thesis: Learning a second language benefits young children. Which is the most convincing supporting evidence?

    • A. Children like songs.
    • B. Research suggests bilingual children often perform better on tasks requiring attention and switching between rules.
    • C. Spanish is spoken in many countries.
    • D. Languages have different alphabets.

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Answer key: Thesis statements and supporting evidence

  1. 1. D. A study of ten cities found that residents living near parks reported 20% lower stress levels.

  2. 2. A. Schools should start later because teenagers' sleep patterns make early starts harmful to their learning and health.

  3. 3. C. Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves.

  4. 4. C. While social media can connect young people, its effects on sleep, attention and self-esteem mean that its use should be limited.

  5. 5. B. Research suggests bilingual children often perform better on tasks requiring attention and switching between rules.