English lesson plan · 3rd grade (Year 4 in England) · 60 minutes
Choose the best concluding sentence
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.3.1.DCCSS W.3.2.DEngland: Y3/4 Writing (paragraphs)England: Y3 Writing (non-narrative)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Choose the best concluding sentence.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Expanding sentences with detail; Give reasons with because, also and so
Leads to: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?; Choose the strongest conclusion
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 6 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Expanding sentences with detail; Give reasons with because, also and so). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- A bird sang. Which sentence adds the most useful detail? (A bird sang a song a song. / Sang a bird. / A bird it sang. / A tiny robin sang on the frosty fence at dawn.) → A tiny robin sang on the frosty fence at dawn.Prompt: Good detail tells us more: what kind, where, when or why.
- Choose the linking word that fits. We should plant more trees ___ they give us clean air. (because / but / so / or) → becausePrompt: Is the writer giving a reason (because), adding another reason (also) or showing a result (so)?
- Read the question. Which sentence gives an opinion with a reason? (Summer is my favourite season because the days are long and sunny. / It is summer. / What is your favourite season? / Summer comes after spring.) → Summer is my favourite season because the days are long and sunny.Prompt: An opinion is what someone thinks or feels.
Hook · 6 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Choose the best concluding sentence. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 12 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Making a bird feeder is easy. First, spread seed butter on a pine cone. Next, roll it in birdseed. Then tie a string to the top. Which sentence would make the best ending?
- Step 1: A good concluding sentence sums up or finishes the main idea of the paragraph.
- Step 2: So the answer is: Finally, hang it on a branch and watch the birds arrive!
- Answer: Finally, hang it on a branch and watch the birds arrive!
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 12 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which sentence sounds most like a CONCLUDING sentence? (Bikes have two wheels. / All in all, cycling is a fun way to stay healthy. / My bike is green. / Some people cycle to work.) → All in all, cycling is a fun way to stay healthy.Prompt: Concluding sentences often begin with words like In conclusion, All in all, Overall, So or That is why.
- Making a bird feeder is easy. First, spread seed butter on a pine cone. Next, roll it in birdseed. Then tie a string to the top. Which sentence would make the best ending? (Pine cones come from trees. / Birds have feathers. / I don't like butter. / Finally, hang it on a branch and watch the birds arrive!) → Finally, hang it on a branch and watch the birds arrive!Prompt: A concluding sentence wraps up the whole paragraph.
You do: independent practice · 17 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 7 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Our school should have a reading den. It would give us a quiet place to read at lunchtime. It would also help younger children love books. Which sentence would make the best ending? (Some books have pictures. / I like football too. / That is why a reading den would make our school even better. / Lunch is at twelve o'clock.) → That is why a reading den would make our school even better.Prompt: A concluding sentence wraps up the whole paragraph.
- Which sentence sounds most like a CONCLUDING sentence? (Fish live in water. / Taps can drip. / Water is wet. / That is why everyone should try to save water.) → That is why everyone should try to save water.Prompt: Concluding sentences often begin with words like In conclusion, All in all, Overall, So or That is why.
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Expanding sentences with detail.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?; Choose the strongest conclusion.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-3.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder