English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 60 minutes
Punctuating dialogue correctly
Punctuation
CCSS L.7.2CCSS W.7.3.BEngland: KS3 English (punctuation)England: GCSE English Language Paper 1 Q5 (narrative writing)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Punctuating dialogue correctly.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 6 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? • "Can I help?" asked the shopkeeper. • "Can I help," asked the shopkeeper? • "Can I help"? asked the shopkeeper. • "Can I help? asked the shopkeeper." ("Can I help?" asked the shopkeeper. / "Can I help," asked the shopkeeper? / "Can I help"? asked the shopkeeper. / "Can I help? asked the shopkeeper.") → "Can I help?" asked the shopkeeper.Prompt: Speech marks (quotation marks) go around the exact words spoken, including their punctuation.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? • Tom asked, Where is my coat? • Tom asked, "Where is my coat"? • Tom asked, "Where is my coat?" • Tom asked "where is my coat?" (Tom asked, Where is my coat? / Tom asked, "Where is my coat"? / Tom asked, "Where is my coat?" / Tom asked "where is my coat?") → Tom asked, "Where is my coat?"Prompt: Speech marks (quotation marks) go around the exact words spoken, including their punctuation.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? • "Let's go to the park" said Mia. • Let's go to the park," said Mia. • "Let's go to the park," said Mia. • "Let's go to the park, said Mia." ("Let's go to the park" said Mia. / Let's go to the park," said Mia. / "Let's go to the park," said Mia. / "Let's go to the park, said Mia.") → "Let's go to the park," said Mia.Prompt: Speech marks (quotation marks) go around the exact words spoken, including their punctuation.
Hook · 6 min
- Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
- Share the objective: Punctuating dialogue correctly. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 12 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which line of dialogue is punctuated correctly? • "Watch out!," shouted the coach. • "Watch out"! shouted the coach. • "Watch out!" shouted the coach. • "Watch out," shouted the coach!
- Step 1: Spoken words go inside quotation marks; separate them from the speaker tag with a comma (or ? or !), and start each new speech with a capital letter.
- Step 2: An exclamation mark goes inside the quotation marks, and no comma is added.
- Step 3: So the answer is: "Watch out!" shouted the coach.
- Answer: "Watch out!" shouted the coach.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 12 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which line of dialogue is punctuated correctly? • "If we hurry," said Ana, "we can still catch it." • "If we hurry" said Ana "we can still catch it." • "If we hurry," said Ana, "We can still catch it." • "If we hurry," said Ana. "we can still catch it." ("If we hurry," said Ana, "we can still catch it." / "If we hurry" said Ana "we can still catch it." / "If we hurry," said Ana, "We can still catch it." / "If we hurry," said Ana. "we can still catch it.") → "If we hurry," said Ana, "we can still catch it."Prompt: Punctuation at the end of spoken words goes INSIDE the quotation marks.
- Read the question and choose. How should you punctuate a quotation inside someone's speech? (use brackets / use capital letters / use two sets of double quotation marks / use single quotation marks inside double ones (or the reverse)) → use single quotation marks inside double ones (or the reverse)Prompt: Think about how dialogue looks on the page of a novel.
You do: independent practice · 17 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 7 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Read the question and choose. Why do writers often use verbs like 'whispered' or 'snapped' instead of 'said'? (to show how the words are spoken / to avoid using quotation marks / to make sentences shorter / because 'said' is incorrect) → to show how the words are spokenPrompt: Think about how dialogue looks on the page of a novel.
- Which line of dialogue is punctuated correctly? • Mia said, "I'm going to be late." • Mia said "I'm going to be late." • Mia said, "I'm going to be late". • Mia said, "i'm going to be late." (Mia said, "I'm going to be late." / Mia said "I'm going to be late." / Mia said, "I'm going to be late". / Mia said, "i'm going to be late.") → Mia said, "I'm going to be late."Prompt: Punctuation at the end of spoken words goes INSIDE the quotation marks.
Watch out for
- Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
- Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue.
- Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-7.
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