English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 60 minutes
Tone and mood
Reading Comprehension
CCSS RL.7.4CCSS RI.8.4England: KS3 ReadingEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 1 Q2
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Tone and mood.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Making inferences
Leads to: Analysing language for effect; Foreshadowing, flashback, cliffhanger and red herring; Explaining the effect of a technique (GCSE)
Materials: A short text or extract (one copy each), Highlighters, Question cards, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 6 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Making inferences). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- The coach blew the whistle, and the players trudged off the field, heads down, while the other team cheered. What can you infer? (The players lost the match. / The players are going to start playing. / The players won. / The match was cancelled.) → The players lost the match.Prompt: The answer is not written word for word. Look for clues.
- The house was silent. Dust covered the furniture, and cobwebs hung from every corner. What can you infer about the house? (Nobody has lived there for a long time. / It is brand new. / It was cleaned this morning. / A party is happening.) → Nobody has lived there for a long time.Prompt: The answer is not written word for word. Look for clues.
- When Grace walked in, her hair was dripping and her shoes squelched on the floor. What can you infer? (Grace has been asleep. / Grace has been reading. / It is a hot, sunny day. / It is raining outside.) → It is raining outside.Prompt: The answer is not written word for word. Look for clues.
Hook · 6 min
- Read the first lines of a short text aloud and ask what students predict will happen and why.
- Share the objective: Tone and mood. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 12 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: The empty swing creaked in the wind. Grey rain fell on the abandoned playground, and the last leaves dropped from the trees. What is the mood?
- Step 1: Tone is the writer's attitude; mood is the feeling created for the reader.
- Step 2: So the answer is: melancholy (sad and lonely)
- Answer: melancholy (sad and lonely)
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 12 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- The corridor stretched into darkness. Somewhere, water dripped. A door, which had been closed a moment ago, now stood half open. What is the mood? (cheerful and bright / tense and eerie / calm and sleepy / funny and silly) → tense and eeriePrompt: What feeling do the word choices create?
- Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, to every volunteer who gave up their weekends. You made this possible. What is the writer's tone? (bored / bitter / mocking / grateful) → gratefulPrompt: What feeling do the word choices create?
You do: independent practice · 17 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 7 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- The empty swing creaked in the wind. Grey rain fell on the abandoned playground, and the last leaves dropped from the trees. What is the mood? (melancholy (sad and lonely) / exciting / joyful / playful) → melancholy (sad and lonely)Prompt: What feeling do the word choices create?
- The corridor stretched into darkness. Somewhere, water dripped. A door, which had been closed a moment ago, now stood half open. What is the mood? (calm and sleepy / funny and silly / cheerful and bright / tense and eerie) → tense and eeriePrompt: What feeling do the word choices create?
Watch out for
- Answering from memory or opinion instead of evidence in the text.
- Copying a long quote without explaining what it shows.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Making inferences.
- Use concrete materials: a short text or extract (one copy each).
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Analysing language for effect; Foreshadowing, flashback, cliffhanger and red herring; Explaining the effect of a technique (GCSE).
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-7.
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