Choosing the detail that best supports a point

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.7.1.BCCSS W.7.2.BEngland: KS3 Writing (paragraphing)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Choosing the detail that best supports a point.

I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
I can explain each step and say why it works.
I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Choosing the best topic sentence; Citing textual evidence

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 6 min

Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choosing the best topic sentence; Citing textual evidence). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.

___ Volunteers collected 300 kilograms of rubbish, planted wildflowers and built two benches from recycled plastic. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Wildflowers are colourful. / Benches can be made of wood. / Last weekend's clean-up transformed the riverside park. / Rubbish is bad.) → Last weekend's clean-up transformed the riverside park.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?
Topic sentence: "Recycling at home is easier than many families think." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (A labelled box by the bin makes sorting quick. / Rinsing containers takes only a few seconds. / Plastic was first invented in the 1800s. / Most councils collect sorted recycling every week.) → Plastic was first invented in the 1800s.Prompt: Reread the topic sentence. What is the paragraph promising to discuss?
___ First, choose a quiet space. Next, set a timer for twenty-five minutes. Finally, take a short break before starting again. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Timers are useful in kitchens. / A few simple steps can make homework time far more productive. / I don't like homework. / Homework is set by teachers.) → A few simple steps can make homework time far more productive.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?

Hook · 6 min

Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
Share the objective: Choosing the detail that best supports a point. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 12 min

Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
Example: Point: "Our school canteen should offer more plant-based meals." Which detail best supports this point?
Step 1: The best support is relevant (about the point) and specific (facts, figures, examples).
Step 2: Survey evidence directly shows demand for the change.
Step 3: So the answer is: In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
Answer: In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 12 min

Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.

Point: "Reading for pleasure helps young people do better at school." Which detail best supports this point? (Some people prefer audiobooks. / Libraries are quiet places. / Research has found that children who read for fun tend to make more progress in vocabulary and maths. / Many books have colourful covers.) → Research has found that children who read for fun tend to make more progress in vocabulary and maths.Prompt: Which detail is directly about the point, not just the same topic?
Read the question and choose. Point: "Teenagers need more sleep than adults." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Sleep is important for everyone. • Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults. • Many adults drink coffee. • Some teenagers have bunk beds. (Sleep is important for everyone. / Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults. / Many adults drink coffee. / Some teenagers have bunk beds.) → Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.Prompt: Does the detail prove or illustrate the point, or is it just on the same topic?

You do: independent practice · 17 min

Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 7 min

Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.

Read the question and choose. Point: "The park needs more bins." Which detail is MOST relevant? • The park opened in 1901. • Many people walk their dogs there. • The park has a duck pond. • Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. (The park opened in 1901. / Many people walk their dogs there. / The park has a duck pond. / Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.) → Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.Prompt: Does the detail prove or illustrate the point, or is it just on the same topic?
Point: "Reading for pleasure helps young people do better at school." Which detail best supports this point? (Many books have colourful covers. / Research has found that children who read for fun tend to make more progress in vocabulary and maths. / Libraries are quiet places. / Some people prefer audiobooks.) → Research has found that children who read for fun tend to make more progress in vocabulary and maths.Prompt: Which detail is directly about the point, not just the same topic?

Watch out for

Writing everything at once without planning.
Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

Review first: Choosing the best topic sentence.
Use concrete materials: a model text.
Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Choosing the detail that best supports a point

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Question 1
Point: "Short breaks during study sessions improve concentration." Which detail best supports this point?
- A. Some students study in their bedrooms.
- B. Breaks are popular with everyone.
- C. Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.
- D. Timers can be bought cheaply.
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Question 2
Read the question and choose. Point: "Video games can build useful skills." Which detail is MOST relevant? • The first video game console went on sale in 1972. • Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead. • Some games are very expensive. • Many games have beautiful music.
- A. The first video game console went on sale in 1972.
- B. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.
- C. Some games are very expensive.
- D. Many games have beautiful music.
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Question 3
Point: "Wildflower verges help bees." Which detail best supports this point?
- A. Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower.
- B. Mowing verges is noisy.
- C. Bees can sting.
- D. Some wildflowers are purple.
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Question 4
Read the question and choose. Point: "The park needs more bins." Which detail is MOST relevant? • The park has a duck pond. • Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. • The park opened in 1901. • Many people walk their dogs there.
- A. The park has a duck pond.
- B. Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.
- C. The park opened in 1901.
- D. Many people walk their dogs there.
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Question 5
Point: "The town needs a pedestrian crossing outside the primary school." Which detail best supports this point?
- A. The road is called Station Road.
- B. There have been four near-misses involving children at that spot this year, according to the police.
- C. Many parents drive cars.
- D. The school was built in 1962.
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Question 6
Read the question and choose. Point: "The park needs more bins." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Many people walk their dogs there. • The park opened in 1901. • The park has a duck pond. • Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.
- A. Many people walk their dogs there.
- B. The park opened in 1901.
- C. The park has a duck pond.
- D. Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.
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Question 7
Point: "Our school canteen should offer more plant-based meals." Which detail best supports this point?
- A. Vegetables come in many colours.
- B. The canteen opens at 12.15.
- C. Some students bring packed lunches.
- D. In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
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Question 8
Read the question and choose. Point: "Video games can build useful skills." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead. • The first video game console went on sale in 1972. • Some games are very expensive. • Many games have beautiful music.
- A. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.
- B. The first video game console went on sale in 1972.
- C. Some games are very expensive.
- D. Many games have beautiful music.

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Answer key: Choosing the detail that best supports a point

1. C. Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.
2. B. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.
3. A. Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower.
4. B. Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.
5. B. There have been four near-misses involving children at that spot this year, according to the police.
6. D. Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.
7. D. In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
8. A. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.