English lesson plan · 11th grade (Year 12 in England) · 60 minutes
Transitions in academic texts (SAT, advanced)
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.11-12.2.CCCSS W.11-12.1.CEngland: SAT Expression of Ideas (Transitions)England: ACT English
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Transitions in academic texts (SAT, advanced).
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Transitions: matching the word to the relationship; Transitions (SAT/ACT)
Leads to: ACT-style editing: NO CHANGE or a better option?
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 6 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Transitions: matching the word to the relationship; Transitions (SAT/ACT)). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- What relationship does this transition show? therefore (addition / contrast / cause and effect / sequence or time) → cause and effectPrompt: Imagine the word joining two sentences. Is the second one adding, opposing, resulting, illustrating, coming next, or admitting something?
- Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The first printing presses were slow and costly. ___, books became cheaper as the technology improved. (For example / Over time / In contrast / Similarly) → Over timePrompt: Read both sentences. What is the relationship between them?
- Choose the transition that best fits the logic of the text. The village is tiny. ___, it has three bakeries. (Even so / For example / Therefore / As a result) → Even soPrompt: Read the sentence before and after the gap. How are they related?
Hook · 6 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Transitions in academic texts (SAT, advanced). Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 12 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The study found that sleep improves memory. ___, students who slept eight hours remembered 20% more words.
- Step 1: The right transition captures the exact logical relationship between two sentences.
- Step 2: Put it back into the sentence and read it aloud: "The study found that sleep improves memory. Specifically, students who slept eight hours remembered 20% more words."
- Step 3: So the answer is: Specifically
- Answer: Specifically
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 12 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Is the transition in this text logical? The ancient road was built for carts. Similarly, modern cars find many sections too narrow. (correct / incorrect) → incorrectPrompt: Cover the choices. In your own words, how does the second sentence relate to the first?
- Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The two languages share many words. ___, their grammar is very different. (Thus / Likewise / For example / Even so) → Even soPrompt: Cover the choices. In your own words, how does the second sentence relate to the first?
You do: independent practice · 17 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 7 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Is the transition in this text logical? Octopuses can change colour. Instead, they can also change the texture of their skin. (correct / incorrect) → incorrectPrompt: Cover the choices. In your own words, how does the second sentence relate to the first?
- Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? Glaciers store fresh water. ___, when they melt, sea levels rise. (Nevertheless / For instance / Similarly / Consequently) → ConsequentlyPrompt: Cover the choices. In your own words, how does the second sentence relate to the first?
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Transitions: matching the word to the relationship.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: ACT-style editing: NO CHANGE or a better option?.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-11.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder