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English lesson plan · 5th grade (Year 6 in England) · 60 minutes

Choose the strongest conclusion

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.5.1.DCCSS W.5.2.EEngland: Y5/6 Writing (endings)England: Y5/6 Writing (composition)

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Choose the strongest conclusion.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Choose the best concluding sentence; Choose the best summary of a short text

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 6 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choose the best concluding sentence; Choose the best summary of a short text). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which sentence sounds most like a CONCLUDING sentence? (Pack a hat. / Pack some snacks. / Pack a water bottle. / So, remember to pack these things for a great day out.) → So, remember to pack these things for a great day out.Prompt: Concluding sentences often begin with words like In conclusion, All in all, Overall, So or That is why.
  2. Honeybees live in colonies of thousands. The queen lays the eggs. Worker bees collect nectar and pollen, look after the young and guard the hive. Drones have one job: to mate with a queen. Every bee has a role that keeps the colony alive. Which is the best summary? (Drones are male bees. / In a honeybee colony, the queen, workers and drones each have a job that keeps the hive alive. / Bees are the most amazing insects in the world. / Worker bees collect nectar and pollen.) → In a honeybee colony, the queen, workers and drones each have a job that keeps the hive alive.Prompt: A summary is short and covers the WHOLE text, not just one part.
  3. Our trip to the science museum was amazing. We touched a real meteorite. We built a robot arm. We even watched a show about lightning. Which sentence would make the best ending? (It was the best school trip I have ever been on. / Meteorites are rocks. / The bus was blue. / Robots need batteries.) → It was the best school trip I have ever been on.Prompt: A concluding sentence wraps up the whole paragraph.

Hook · 6 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Choose the strongest conclusion. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 12 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Bees pollinate many of the crops we eat. Sadly, in many places their numbers are falling. The good news is that people can help by planting flowers and avoiding pesticides. Which is the strongest conclusion for this article?
  • Step 1: Strong conclusions sum up, reflect or call the reader to act; weak ones just stop or add random facts.
  • Step 2: So the answer is: Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.
  • Answer: Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 12 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. What kind of ending is this? As the sun set, Mia smiled; she knew she would never fear the dark again. (sums up the main points / calls the reader to act / reflects on a feeling or lesson) → reflects on a feeling or lessonPrompt: Does it tell the reader to do something, sum up facts, or show what a character feels or learned?
  2. At the science fair, Ana's robot kept dropping the blocks. She checked every part and finally found one loose wire. She fixed it, pressed start, and the robot sorted every block perfectly. Which is the strongest ending for this story? (The science fair was in the hall. / Ana grinned at the little robot. One tiny wire had taught her the biggest lesson: never give up. / Robots need electricity. / Then everyone went home.) → Ana grinned at the little robot. One tiny wire had taught her the biggest lesson: never give up.Prompt: A good ending links back to the main idea or the beginning.

You do: independent practice · 17 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 7 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Sam had always been scared of the sea. All summer he took swimming lessons, one nervous length at a time. On the last day of the holiday, he swam out to the rocks beside his sister. Which is the strongest ending for this story? (And that was the story of Sam. / Then Sam went home and had dinner. / As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more. / The sea is made of salt water.) → As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more.Prompt: A good ending links back to the main idea or the beginning.
  2. What kind of ending is this? Overall, recycling saves energy, protects wildlife and reduces rubbish. (sums up the main points / calls the reader to act / reflects on a feeling or lesson) → sums up the main pointsPrompt: Does it tell the reader to do something, sum up facts, or show what a character feels or learned?

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Choose the best concluding sentence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-5.

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  1. Question 1

    What kind of ending is this? Kai hugged his new dog and realised that home was wherever Pepper was.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  2. Question 2

    Sam had always been scared of the sea. All summer he took swimming lessons, one nervous length at a time. On the last day of the holiday, he swam out to the rocks beside his sister. Which is the strongest ending for this story?

    • A. As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more.
    • B. Then Sam went home and had dinner.
    • C. And that was the story of Sam.
    • D. The sea is made of salt water.
  3. Question 3

    What kind of ending is this? As the sun set, Mia smiled; she knew she would never fear the dark again.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  4. Question 4

    What kind of ending is this? Sam looked back at the mountain. It had been hard, but it had been worth it.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  5. Question 5

    Bees pollinate many of the crops we eat. Sadly, in many places their numbers are falling. The good news is that people can help by planting flowers and avoiding pesticides. Which is the strongest conclusion for this article?

    • A. Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.
    • B. The end.
    • C. Bees are insects.
    • D. That is all I know about bees.
  6. Question 6

    At the science fair, Ana's robot kept dropping the blocks. She checked every part and finally found one loose wire. She fixed it, pressed start, and the robot sorted every block perfectly. Which is the strongest ending for this story?

    • A. Robots need electricity.
    • B. Ana grinned at the little robot. One tiny wire had taught her the biggest lesson: never give up.
    • C. The science fair was in the hall.
    • D. Then everyone went home.
  7. Question 7

    What kind of ending is this? Please vote for a school garden at Friday's meeting.

    • A. sums up the main points
    • B. calls the reader to act
    • C. reflects on a feeling or lesson
  8. Question 8

    Our school should have a 'no car' day once a week. Fewer cars would mean less pollution at the gates. The roads would be safer, and walking or cycling would help pupils get fit. Which is the strongest conclusion for this letter?

    • A. Some people drive to school.
    • B. One day a week without cars would give us cleaner air, safer streets and healthier pupils, so please say yes.
    • C. Cars have four wheels.
    • D. Thank you for reading my letter about stuff.

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Answer key: Choose the strongest conclusion

  1. 1. C. reflects on a feeling or lesson

  2. 2. A. As the waves lifted him, Sam laughed. The sea did not feel like an enemy any more.

  3. 3. C. reflects on a feeling or lesson

  4. 4. C. reflects on a feeling or lesson

  5. 5. A. Bees feed the world in secret; a few flowers on every balcony could help repay them.

  6. 6. B. Ana grinned at the little robot. One tiny wire had taught her the biggest lesson: never give up.

  7. 7. B. calls the reader to act

  8. 8. B. One day a week without cars would give us cleaner air, safer streets and healthier pupils, so please say yes.