English lesson plan · 6th grade (Year 7 in England) · 45 minutes
Proofreading for punctuation
Punctuation
CCSS L.6.2CCSS L.6.2.BEngland: KS2 SATs GPSEngland: KS3 SPaG
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Proofreading for punctuation.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Apostrophes for possession; Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue; Commas in lists
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Apostrophes for possession; Speech marks (quotation marks) for dialogue; Commas in lists). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which shows possession correctly? the coats of the girls (the girls' coats / the girl's coats / the girls coats / the girls's coats) → the girls' coatsPrompt: Who is the owner? One owner or more than one?
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? • "Hurry up," said Dad, "or we'll miss the train." • "Hurry up" said Dad "or we'll miss the train." • "Hurry up, said Dad, or we'll miss the train." • "Hurry up," said Dad, "Or we'll miss the train." ("Hurry up," said Dad, "or we'll miss the train." / "Hurry up" said Dad "or we'll miss the train." / "Hurry up, said Dad, or we'll miss the train." / "Hurry up," said Dad, "Or we'll miss the train.") → "Hurry up," said Dad, "or we'll miss the train."Prompt: Speech marks (quotation marks) go around the exact words spoken, including their punctuation.
- Which sentence uses commas correctly? • We saw lions tigers and bears. • We saw lions, tigers and bears. • We saw lions, tigers, and, bears. • We saw, lions, tigers and bears. (We saw lions tigers and bears. / We saw lions, tigers and bears. / We saw lions, tigers, and, bears. / We saw, lions, tigers and bears.) → We saw lions, tigers and bears.Prompt: Commas separate the items in a list.
Hook · 5 min
- Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
- Share the objective: Proofreading for punctuation. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: On tuesday we went to the zoo, we saw lions. How many punctuation or capital-letter errors are there?
- Step 1: Proofread in stages so you notice every kind of error.
- Step 2: 'Tuesday' needs a capital, and the comma splice needs a full stop or semicolon.
- Step 3: So the answer is: 2
- Answer: 2
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Sam bought milk eggs and bread at the shop How many punctuation errors are there? (1 / 2 / 3 / 4) → 2Prompt: Check capitals, then end marks, then commas, then apostrophes and speech marks.
- On tuesday we went to the zoo, we saw lions. How many punctuation or capital-letter errors are there? (1 / 2 / 3 / 4) → 2Prompt: Check capitals, then end marks, then commas, then apostrophes and speech marks.
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 5 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- The childrens' coats were wet so they hung them up. How many punctuation errors are there? (0 / 1 / 2 / 3) → 2Prompt: Check capitals, then end marks, then commas, then apostrophes and speech marks.
- Sam bought milk eggs and bread at the shop How many punctuation errors are there? (1 / 2 / 3 / 4) → 2Prompt: Check capitals, then end marks, then commas, then apostrophes and speech marks.
Watch out for
- Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
- Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Apostrophes for possession.
- Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-6.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder