English lesson plan · 4th grade (Year 5 in England) · 45 minutes
Topic sentences and paragraphs
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.4.2.ACCSS W.4.1.AEngland: Y4 Writing (paragraphs)England: KS2 Writing
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Topic sentences and paragraphs.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Combining sentences; Main idea and supporting details
Leads to: Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion); Organisation: sentence placement and logical order; Thesis statements and supporting evidence
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Combining sentences; Main idea and supporting details). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which is the best way to join these sentences? The film was long. It was exciting. • The film long was but exciting. • The film was long so exciting. • The film was long but exciting. • The film was long, it was exciting. (The film long was but exciting. / The film was long so exciting. / The film was long but exciting. / The film was long, it was exciting.) → The film was long but exciting.Prompt: How are the two ideas linked: adding, contrasting, giving a reason, or a result?
- Sloths move very slowly. They hang upside down in trees for most of the day. They even sleep and eat upside down. Moving slowly helps them save energy. What is the main idea? (Sloths live slow, upside-down lives in trees. / Trees are tall. / Sloths sleep a lot. / Sloths eat leaves.) → Sloths live slow, upside-down lives in trees.Prompt: What is the WHOLE text mostly about, not just one part?
- Which is the best way to join these sentences? The shop was shut. We went home. • The shop was shut but we went home. • The shop was shut, so we went home. • The shop was shut, we went home. • The shop was shut because we went home. (The shop was shut but we went home. / The shop was shut, so we went home. / The shop was shut, we went home. / The shop was shut because we went home.) → The shop was shut, so we went home.Prompt: How are the two ideas linked: adding, contrasting, giving a reason, or a result?
Hook · 5 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Topic sentences and paragraphs. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Bees are vital to our food supply. They pollinate fruits and vegetables. Without them, many crops would fail. My favourite fruit is the mango. Farmers often keep hives near their fields. Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph?
- Step 1: A paragraph has one main idea, introduced by a topic sentence and supported by details.
- Step 2: So the answer is: My favourite fruit is the mango.
- Answer: My favourite fruit is the mango.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Bees are vital to our food supply. They pollinate fruits and vegetables. Without them, many crops would fail. My favourite fruit is the mango. Farmers often keep hives near their fields. Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (Without them, many crops would fail. / Farmers often keep hives near their fields. / They pollinate fruits and vegetables. / My favourite fruit is the mango.) → My favourite fruit is the mango.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
- ___ First, gather your ingredients. Next, mix them in a large bowl. Finally, bake for twenty minutes. Which is the best topic sentence? (Bowls can be large or small. / Making muffins is simple if you follow three steps. / My aunt has an oven. / Muffins are delicious.) → Making muffins is simple if you follow three steps.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- ___ First, gather your ingredients. Next, mix them in a large bowl. Finally, bake for twenty minutes. Which is the best topic sentence? (Making muffins is simple if you follow three steps. / Muffins are delicious. / My aunt has an oven. / Bowls can be large or small.) → Making muffins is simple if you follow three steps.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
- ___ It gives pupils exercise. It teaches teamwork. It also helps them make friends. Which is the best topic sentence? (Teamwork is a word. / Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils. / Football is played with a ball. / Some pupils prefer reading.) → Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Combining sentences.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion); Organisation: sentence placement and logical order; Thesis statements and supporting evidence.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-4.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder