English lesson plan · 12th grade (Year 13 in England) · 45 minutes
Advanced subjunctive: were it not for, lest, that she not be
Grammar
CCSS L.11-12.1.ACCSS L.11-12.3.AEngland: A-level English LanguageEngland: AP LanguageEngland: ACT English
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Advanced subjunctive: were it not for, lest, that she not be.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: The subjunctive: if I were, I wish it were, I suggest she be; Mixed conditionals: past cause, present result (and vice versa)
Leads to: Inversion for emphasis: Never have I…, Not only did she…
Materials: Sentence strips, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (The subjunctive: if I were, I wish it were, I suggest she be; Mixed conditionals: past cause, present result (and vice versa)). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Is this sentence correct in formal written English? If I had saved my money, I would have had a new bike now. (correct / incorrect) → incorrectPrompt: Look for time words: now, today, yesterday, last week. Which half is past and which is present?
- Choose the correct verb form for formal English. She talks as if she ___ the boss. (be / were / was / is) → werePrompt: Is it imaginary (if, wish, as if)? Or a demand/suggestion (insist, suggest, essential that…)?
- Which sentence uses the subjunctive correctly? • The teacher asked that the class is quiet. • The teacher asked that the class was quiet. • The teacher asked that the class are quiet. • The teacher asked that the class be quiet. (The teacher asked that the class is quiet. / The teacher asked that the class was quiet. / The teacher asked that the class are quiet. / The teacher asked that the class be quiet.) → The teacher asked that the class be quiet.Prompt: Look for if, wish, as if, or a verb like ask/insist/suggest + that.
Hook · 5 min
- Show a sentence with the grammar point used wrongly and ask what sounds odd.
- Share the objective: Advanced subjunctive: were it not for, lest, that she not be. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Choose the form that is correct in formal written English. ___ I known about the storm, I would have stayed at home.
- Step 1: Formal English keeps the subjunctive after verbs of demanding and suggesting, in inverted conditions (Were it not, Had I known, Should you need) and in fixed phrases.
- Step 2: Inverted third conditional: 'Had I known' = 'If I had known'.
- Step 3: Put it back into the sentence and read it aloud: "Had I known about the storm, I would have stayed at home."
- Step 4: So the answer is: Had
- Answer: Had
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Choose the form that is correct in formal written English. The doctor recommended that he ___ sugar for a month. (avoids / avoiding / avoided / avoid) → avoidPrompt: Is this a demand or recommendation (that + base form), an unreal condition (were/had/should), or a fixed expression?
- Is this sentence correct in formal written English? The committee proposed that every member submit a short report. (correct / incorrect) → correctPrompt: Is this a demand or recommendation (that + base form), an unreal condition (were/had/should), or a fixed expression?
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Is this sentence correct in formal written English? The rules require that each team name at least one substitute. (correct / incorrect) → correctPrompt: Is this a demand or recommendation (that + base form), an unreal condition (were/had/should), or a fixed expression?
- Choose the form that is correct in formal written English. ___ I known about the storm, I would have stayed at home. (Would / Did / Had / Have) → HadPrompt: Is this a demand or recommendation (that + base form), an unreal condition (were/had/should), or a fixed expression?
Watch out for
- Naming the feature but not using it in their own sentences.
- Thinking a sentence is right because it sounds right when spoken casually.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: The subjunctive: if I were, I wish it were, I suggest she be.
- Use concrete materials: sentence strips.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Inversion for emphasis: Never have I…, Not only did she….
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-12.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder