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English lesson plan · 11th grade (Year 12 in England) · 45 minutes

Transitions in academic texts (SAT, advanced)

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.11-12.2.CCCSS W.11-12.1.CEngland: SAT Expression of Ideas (Transitions)England: ACT English

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Transitions in academic texts (SAT, advanced).

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Transitions: matching the word to the relationship; Transitions (SAT/ACT)

Leads to: ACT-style editing: NO CHANGE or a better option?

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 5 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Transitions: matching the word to the relationship; Transitions (SAT/ACT)). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. What relationship does this transition show? meanwhile (cause and effect / example / sequence or time / concession) → sequence or timePrompt: Imagine the word joining two sentences. Is the second one adding, opposing, resulting, illustrating, coming next, or admitting something?
  2. Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The author grew up in a fishing village. ___, many of her novels are set by the sea. (In contrast / Unsurprisingly / However / Nevertheless) → UnsurprisinglyPrompt: Read both sentences. What is the relationship between them?
  3. Choose the transition that best fits the logic of the text. The bridge was damaged in the flood. ___, it was closed for repairs. (Moreover / For instance / Nevertheless / Consequently) → ConsequentlyPrompt: Read the sentence before and after the gap. How are they related?

Hook · 5 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Transitions in academic texts (SAT, advanced). Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 10 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The study found that sleep improves memory. ___, students who slept eight hours remembered 20% more words.
  • Step 1: The right transition captures the exact logical relationship between two sentences.
  • Step 2: Put it back into the sentence and read it aloud: "The study found that sleep improves memory. Specifically, students who slept eight hours remembered 20% more words."
  • Step 3: So the answer is: Specifically
  • Answer: Specifically
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 10 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Is the transition in this text logical? The study found that sleep improves memory. Instead, students who slept eight hours remembered 20% more words. (correct / incorrect) → incorrectPrompt: Cover the choices. In your own words, how does the second sentence relate to the first?
  2. Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? Bees use the sun to navigate. ___, they can find their way even on cloudy days by detecting polarised light. (Remarkably / Similarly / Consequently / In other words) → RemarkablyPrompt: Cover the choices. In your own words, how does the second sentence relate to the first?

You do: independent practice · 10 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 5 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The ancient road was built for carts. ___, modern cars find many sections too narrow. (For instance / Likewise / Similarly / As a result) → As a resultPrompt: Cover the choices. In your own words, how does the second sentence relate to the first?
  2. Is the transition in this text logical? Bees use the sun to navigate. Remarkably, they can find their way even on cloudy days by detecting polarised light. (correct / incorrect) → correctPrompt: Cover the choices. In your own words, how does the second sentence relate to the first?

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Transitions: matching the word to the relationship.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: ACT-style editing: NO CHANGE or a better option?.
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Transitions in academic texts (SAT, advanced)

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  1. Question 1

    Is the transition in this text logical? Most frogs lay eggs in water. For instance, the Darwin's frog of Chile raises its tadpoles inside the male's vocal sac.

    • A. correct
    • B. incorrect
  2. Question 2

    Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? Urban trees provide shade and reduce temperatures. ___, they can lower a city's energy use in summer.

    • A. Nonetheless
    • B. Thus
    • C. In contrast
    • D. However
  3. Question 3

    Is the transition in this text logical? The two languages share many words. Likewise, their grammar is very different.

    • A. correct
    • B. incorrect
  4. Question 4

    Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The volcano had been quiet for 400 years. ___, scientists were surprised when it began to rumble.

    • A. For instance
    • B. Understandably
    • C. However
    • D. Similarly
  5. Question 5

    Is the transition in this text logical? Urban trees provide shade and reduce temperatures. Thus, they can lower a city's energy use in summer.

    • A. correct
    • B. incorrect
  6. Question 6

    Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? Early critics dismissed the painter's work. ___, it now hangs in major galleries worldwide.

    • A. Therefore
    • B. Today, however
    • C. For example
    • D. Similarly
  7. Question 7

    Is the transition in this text logical? The volcano had been quiet for 400 years. Understandably, scientists were surprised when it began to rumble.

    • A. correct
    • B. incorrect
  8. Question 8

    Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? Some critics call the novel too long. ___, it won three major awards and remains widely taught.

    • A. Therefore
    • B. Nonetheless
    • C. Likewise
    • D. For example

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Answer key: Transitions in academic texts (SAT, advanced)

  1. 1. B. incorrect

  2. 2. B. Thus

  3. 3. B. incorrect

  4. 4. B. Understandably

  5. 5. A. correct

  6. 6. B. Today, however

  7. 7. A. correct

  8. 8. B. Nonetheless