English lesson plan · 4th grade (Year 5 in England) · 45 minutes
Similes and metaphors
Vocabulary
CCSS L.4.5.ACCSS L.5.5.AEngland: Y4/5 Reading (figurative language)England: 11+ English
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Similes and metaphors.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Synonyms
Leads to: Idioms and proverbs; Figurative language: personification, hyperbole, alliteration, onomatopoeia; Literal or figurative meaning?
Materials: Word cards, A thesaurus or dictionary, A short text with the target words, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Synonyms). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which word means the SAME as "odd"? (strange / sticky / ordinary / gentle) → strangePrompt: A synonym has the same or nearly the same meaning.
- Which word is closest in meaning to "persuade"? (convince / inspect / discourage / collapse) → convincePrompt: One of the choices means the opposite. Don't be tricked!
- Choose the word that best fits the clue in brackets. The ___ dog barked at the gate. (large) (tiny / thin / quiet / huge) → hugePrompt: Read the clue in brackets carefully.
Hook · 5 min
- Show an interesting word in a sentence and ask what it might mean from the clues around it.
- Share the objective: Similes and metaphors. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which kind of figurative language is this? The sun smiled down on the picnic.
- Step 1: A simile compares using 'like' or 'as'; a metaphor says one thing IS another; personification gives human qualities to non-human things.
- Step 2: So the answer is: personification
- Answer: personification
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which kind of figurative language is this? The sun smiled down on the picnic. (simile / metaphor / personification) → personificationPrompt: Does it use 'like' or 'as' to compare?
- What does this metaphor mean? The classroom was a zoo after lunch. (There were animals in it. / It was very clean. / It was empty. / It was noisy and wild.) → It was noisy and wild.Prompt: A metaphor is not literally true.
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- What does this metaphor mean? Her voice was music to his ears. (She was singing a song. / He was pleased by what she said. / He could not hear her. / She spoke very loudly.) → He was pleased by what she said.Prompt: A metaphor is not literally true.
- Which kind of figurative language is this? The old house groaned in the storm. (simile / metaphor / personification) → personificationPrompt: Does it use 'like' or 'as' to compare?
Watch out for
- Picking a "bigger" synonym that doesn't fit the meaning.
- Ignoring the clues in the rest of the sentence.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Synonyms.
- Use concrete materials: word cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Idioms and proverbs; Figurative language: personification, hyperbole, alliteration, onomatopoeia; Literal or figurative meaning?.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-4.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder