English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 45 minutes
Tone and mood
Reading Comprehension
CCSS RL.7.4CCSS RI.8.4England: KS3 ReadingEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 1 Q2
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Tone and mood.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Making inferences
Leads to: Analysing language for effect; Foreshadowing, flashback, cliffhanger and red herring; Explaining the effect of a technique (GCSE)
Materials: A short text or extract (one copy each), Highlighters, Question cards, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Making inferences). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- The house was silent. Dust covered the furniture, and cobwebs hung from every corner. What can you infer about the house? (It is brand new. / A party is happening. / Nobody has lived there for a long time. / It was cleaned this morning.) → Nobody has lived there for a long time.Prompt: The answer is not written word for word. Look for clues.
- Tariq stared at his test paper, then crumpled it up and pushed it to the bottom of his bag before his dad could see. What can you infer about the test? (Tariq's dad wrote the test. / The test was cancelled. / Tariq got full marks. / Tariq did not do well.) → Tariq did not do well.Prompt: The answer is not written word for word. Look for clues.
- The coach blew the whistle, and the players trudged off the field, heads down, while the other team cheered. What can you infer? (The players lost the match. / The match was cancelled. / The players won. / The players are going to start playing.) → The players lost the match.Prompt: The answer is not written word for word. Look for clues.
Hook · 5 min
- Read the first lines of a short text aloud and ask what students predict will happen and why.
- Share the objective: Tone and mood. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: The empty swing creaked in the wind. Grey rain fell on the abandoned playground, and the last leaves dropped from the trees. What is the mood?
- Step 1: Tone is the writer's attitude; mood is the feeling created for the reader.
- Step 2: So the answer is: melancholy (sad and lonely)
- Answer: melancholy (sad and lonely)
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- We must act now. Every day we wait, another species disappears forever. This is not a problem for tomorrow. What is the writer's tone? (humorous / uncertain / urgent / relaxed) → urgentPrompt: What feeling do the word choices create?
- Sunlight spilled across the meadow, bees hummed lazily among the clover, and somewhere a child was laughing. What is the mood? (angry / gloomy / threatening / peaceful and happy) → peaceful and happyPrompt: What feeling do the word choices create?
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- The empty swing creaked in the wind. Grey rain fell on the abandoned playground, and the last leaves dropped from the trees. What is the mood? (melancholy (sad and lonely) / playful / joyful / exciting) → melancholy (sad and lonely)Prompt: What feeling do the word choices create?
Watch out for
- Answering from memory or opinion instead of evidence in the text.
- Copying a long quote without explaining what it shows.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Making inferences.
- Use concrete materials: a short text or extract (one copy each).
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Analysing language for effect; Foreshadowing, flashback, cliffhanger and red herring; Explaining the effect of a technique (GCSE).
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-7.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder