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English lesson plan · 4th grade (Year 5 in England) · 45 minutes

Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.4.2.ACCSS W.4.5England: Y4 Writing (paragraphs)England: Y3/4 Writing (evaluate and edit)

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Choose the best concluding sentence; Topic sentences and paragraphs

Leads to: Put the sentences of a paragraph in a logical order

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 5 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choose the best concluding sentence; Topic sentences and paragraphs). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which sentence sounds most like a CONCLUDING sentence? (In conclusion, owls are amazing night-time hunters. / Some owls are brown. / Owls can turn their heads. / Owls have big eyes.) → In conclusion, owls are amazing night-time hunters.Prompt: Concluding sentences often begin with words like In conclusion, All in all, Overall, So or That is why.
  2. Making a bird feeder is easy. First, spread seed butter on a pine cone. Next, roll it in birdseed. Then tie a string to the top. Which sentence would make the best ending? (Finally, hang it on a branch and watch the birds arrive! / I don't like butter. / Birds have feathers. / Pine cones come from trees.) → Finally, hang it on a branch and watch the birds arrive!Prompt: A concluding sentence wraps up the whole paragraph.
  3. Bees are vital to our food supply. They pollinate fruits and vegetables. Without them, many crops would fail. My favourite fruit is the mango. Farmers often keep hives near their fields. Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (They pollinate fruits and vegetables. / Without them, many crops would fail. / My favourite fruit is the mango. / Farmers often keep hives near their fields.) → My favourite fruit is the mango.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?

Hook · 5 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 10 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Robots help people in many ways. (2) Some robots build cars in factories. (3) My brother's bike is blue. (4) Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans. (5) Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.
  • Step 1: The paragraph is about: "Robots help people in many ways." One sentence is off the topic.
  • Step 2: So the answer is: My brother's bike is blue.
  • Answer: My brother's bike is blue.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 10 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Recycling helps protect the planet. (2) Pizza is my favourite food. (3) When we recycle paper, fewer trees need to be cut down. (4) Recycling metal cans saves energy. (5) Recycling plastic keeps it out of rivers and seas. (Pizza is my favourite food. / Recycling helps protect the planet. / Recycling metal cans saves energy. / Recycling plastic keeps it out of rivers and seas.) → Pizza is my favourite food.Prompt: Read the first sentence: it tells you what the paragraph is about.
  2. Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Getting ready for a sleepover is fun. First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush. Next, choose a game or a film to share. (The tomatoes are bright red and ready to pick. / Instead, their wings work like flippers for swimming. / Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow. / Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans.) → Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow.Prompt: What is the paragraph about? Look at the first sentence.

You do: independent practice · 10 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 5 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Getting ready for a sleepover is fun. (2) First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush. (3) Volcanoes can erupt without warning. (4) Next, choose a game or a film to share. (5) Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow. (Next, choose a game or a film to share. / Getting ready for a sleepover is fun. / First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush. / Volcanoes can erupt without warning.) → Volcanoes can erupt without warning.Prompt: Read the first sentence: it tells you what the paragraph is about.
  2. Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Robots help people in many ways. Some robots build cars in factories. Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans. (Recycling metal cans saves energy. / The sunflowers are taller than our teacher. / It helps you sleep better at night. / Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.) → Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.Prompt: What is the paragraph about? Look at the first sentence.

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Choose the best concluding sentence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Put the sentences of a paragraph in a logical order.
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?

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  1. Question 1

    Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Robots help people in many ways. Some robots build cars in factories. Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans.

    • A. The sunflowers are taller than our teacher.
    • B. Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow.
    • C. Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.
    • D. They float on their backs and place a flat stone on their chests.
  2. Question 2

    Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Sea otters are clever tool users. (2) Giraffes have very long necks. (3) They float on their backs and place a flat stone on their chests. (4) Then they smash shellfish against the stone to open them. (5) Some otters keep a favourite stone in a pouch of skin under their arm.

    • A. They float on their backs and place a flat stone on their chests.
    • B. Then they smash shellfish against the stone to open them.
    • C. Sea otters are clever tool users.
    • D. Giraffes have very long necks.
  3. Question 3

    Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? The Amazon rainforest is home to amazing wildlife. Jaguars hunt along the riverbanks. Colourful toucans fly between the trees.

    • A. It helps you sleep better at night.
    • B. Tiny poison dart frogs live on the forest floor.
    • C. Some penguins can dive more than 500 metres deep.
    • D. We even found a family of ladybirds on the beans.
  4. Question 4

    Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Our class garden has grown so much this term. (2) The tomatoes are bright red and ready to pick. (3) My cousin is learning to play the trumpet. (4) The sunflowers are taller than our teacher. (5) We even found a family of ladybirds on the beans.

    • A. The sunflowers are taller than our teacher.
    • B. Our class garden has grown so much this term.
    • C. My cousin is learning to play the trumpet.
    • D. The tomatoes are bright red and ready to pick.
  5. Question 5

    Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Exercise is good for your body and your mind. It makes your heart and muscles stronger. It helps you sleep better at night.

    • A. They float on their backs and place a flat stone on their chests.
    • B. Recycling plastic keeps it out of rivers and seas.
    • C. It can also make you feel happier and calmer.
    • D. Colourful toucans fly between the trees.
  6. Question 6

    Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) The Amazon rainforest is home to amazing wildlife. (2) Jaguars hunt along the riverbanks. (3) Colourful toucans fly between the trees. (4) Tiny poison dart frogs live on the forest floor. (5) Penguins live mostly in the Southern Hemisphere.

    • A. Penguins live mostly in the Southern Hemisphere.
    • B. The Amazon rainforest is home to amazing wildlife.
    • C. Jaguars hunt along the riverbanks.
    • D. Colourful toucans fly between the trees.
  7. Question 7

    Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Getting ready for a sleepover is fun. First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush. Next, choose a game or a film to share.

    • A. Instead, their wings work like flippers for swimming.
    • B. We even found a family of ladybirds on the beans.
    • C. Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow.
    • D. It can also make you feel happier and calmer.
  8. Question 8

    Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Our class garden has grown so much this term. The tomatoes are bright red and ready to pick. The sunflowers are taller than our teacher.

    • A. Recycling plastic keeps it out of rivers and seas.
    • B. We even found a family of ladybirds on the beans.
    • C. It helps you sleep better at night.
    • D. Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.

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Answer key: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?

  1. 1. C. Doctors even use robots to help with delicate operations.

  2. 2. D. Giraffes have very long necks.

  3. 3. B. Tiny poison dart frogs live on the forest floor.

  4. 4. C. My cousin is learning to play the trumpet.

  5. 5. C. It can also make you feel happier and calmer.

  6. 6. A. Penguins live mostly in the Southern Hemisphere.

  7. 7. C. Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow.

  8. 8. B. We even found a family of ladybirds on the beans.