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English lesson plan · 5th grade (Year 6 in England) · 45 minutes

Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion)

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.5.2.CCCSS W.5.1.CEngland: Y5 GPS (cohesive devices)England: KS2 SATs GPS

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion).

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Topic sentences and paragraphs

Leads to: Transitions (SAT/ACT)

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 5 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Topic sentences and paragraphs). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. ___ They can see in near darkness. Their soft feathers let them fly silently. Their sharp talons grip prey tightly. Which is the best topic sentence? (Some birds eat seeds. / I saw an owl once. / Owls are well equipped for hunting at night. / Owls are birds.) → Owls are well equipped for hunting at night.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
  2. ___ First, gather your ingredients. Next, mix them in a large bowl. Finally, bake for twenty minutes. Which is the best topic sentence? (My aunt has an oven. / Bowls can be large or small. / Making muffins is simple if you follow three steps. / Muffins are delicious.) → Making muffins is simple if you follow three steps.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
  3. ___ It gives pupils exercise. It teaches teamwork. It also helps them make friends. Which is the best topic sentence? (Football is played with a ball. / Teamwork is a word. / Some pupils prefer reading. / Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.) → Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?

Hook · 5 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion). Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 10 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Sharks have several rows of teeth. ___, they can lose a tooth and quickly replace it.
  • Step 1: Adverbials such as however, for example, as a result and meanwhile make writing cohesive.
  • Step 2: Put it back into the sentence and read it aloud: "Sharks have several rows of teeth. Consequently, they can lose a tooth and quickly replace it."
  • Step 3: So the answer is: Consequently
  • Answer: Consequently
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 10 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. It rained all week. ___, the river burst its banks. (For example / In contrast / As a result / Meanwhile) → As a resultPrompt: How does the second sentence relate to the first: time, contrast, example or result?
  2. Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. We visited the castle in the morning. ___, we explored the woods. (However / Afterwards / For example / Therefore) → AfterwardsPrompt: How does the second sentence relate to the first: time, contrast, example or result?

You do: independent practice · 10 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 5 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Ali was chopping vegetables. ___, his sister laid the table. (Therefore / Meanwhile / For example / In conclusion) → MeanwhilePrompt: How does the second sentence relate to the first: time, contrast, example or result?
  2. Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Sharks have several rows of teeth. ___, they can lose a tooth and quickly replace it. (Consequently / Firstly / For example / However) → ConsequentlyPrompt: How does the second sentence relate to the first: time, contrast, example or result?

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Topic sentences and paragraphs.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Transitions (SAT/ACT).
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion)

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  1. Question 1

    Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. We visited the castle in the morning. ___, we explored the woods.

    • A. Afterwards
    • B. Therefore
    • C. For example
    • D. However
  2. Question 2

    Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Some people love winter. ___, others count the days until summer.

    • A. As a result
    • B. Firstly
    • C. On the other hand
    • D. For example
  3. Question 3

    Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Sharks have several rows of teeth. ___, they can lose a tooth and quickly replace it.

    • A. For example
    • B. However
    • C. Consequently
    • D. Firstly
  4. Question 4

    Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Ali was chopping vegetables. ___, his sister laid the table.

    • A. Meanwhile
    • B. Therefore
    • C. In conclusion
    • D. For example
  5. Question 5

    Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. It rained all week. ___, the river burst its banks.

    • A. In contrast
    • B. As a result
    • C. Meanwhile
    • D. For example
  6. Question 6

    Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Mix the flour and butter. ___, add the sugar.

    • A. For instance
    • B. However
    • C. In conclusion
    • D. Next
  7. Question 7

    Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Many animals hibernate in winter. ___, hedgehogs sleep from November to March.

    • A. Meanwhile
    • B. Finally
    • C. For example
    • D. However
  8. Question 8

    Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Penguins cannot fly. ___, they are excellent swimmers.

    • A. Therefore
    • B. Firstly
    • C. However
    • D. For instance

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Answer key: Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion)

  1. 1. A. Afterwards

  2. 2. C. On the other hand

  3. 3. C. Consequently

  4. 4. A. Meanwhile

  5. 5. B. As a result

  6. 6. D. Next

  7. 7. C. For example

  8. 8. C. However