English lesson plan · 9th grade (Year 10 in England) · 45 minutes
Organisation: sentence placement and logical order
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.9-10.1.CCCSS W.9-10.2.AEngland: ACT English (Organization)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Organisation: sentence placement and logical order.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Topic sentences and paragraphs; Transitions (SAT/ACT)
Leads to: Adding, deleting and revising for purpose
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Topic sentences and paragraphs; Transitions (SAT/ACT)). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? Bees communicate by dancing. ___, some ants leave scent trails to share information. (Therefore / For example / Similarly / However) → SimilarlyPrompt: Read both sentences. What is the relationship between them?
- ___ It gives pupils exercise. It teaches teamwork. It also helps them make friends. Which is the best topic sentence? (Teamwork is a word. / Football is played with a ball. / Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils. / Some pupils prefer reading.) → Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
- Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The first experiment produced no results. ___, the second experiment confirmed the hypothesis. (For example / By contrast / Thus / Similarly) → By contrastPrompt: Read both sentences. What is the relationship between them?
Hook · 5 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Organisation: sentence placement and logical order. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: A writer wants to add this sentence: "This ability makes them excellent rescue animals." [1] Dogs have an extraordinary sense of smell. [2] They can detect a single drop of scent in a swimming pool of water. [3] Many breeds also have great stamina. Where should the new sentence go?
- Step 1: Logical order uses time sequence, general-to-specific movement and clear references back.
- Step 2: 'This ability' refers to the sense of smell described in sentence 2.
- Step 3: So the answer is: after sentence 2
- Answer: after sentence 2
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- [1] Tardigrades are tiny animals less than a millimetre long. [2] For example, they have survived the vacuum of space. [3] They are famous for surviving extreme conditions. [4] They can also withstand temperatures close to absolute zero. To make the paragraph most logical, sentence 3 should be placed… (where it is now. / after sentence 4. / before sentence 2. / before sentence 1.) → before sentence 2.Prompt: Look for time words, 'for example', 'this' or 'these' that refer back to something.
- A writer wants to add this sentence: "This ability makes them excellent rescue animals." [1] Dogs have an extraordinary sense of smell. [2] They can detect a single drop of scent in a swimming pool of water. [3] Many breeds also have great stamina. Where should the new sentence go? (before sentence 1 / It should not be added. / after sentence 2 / after sentence 3) → after sentence 2Prompt: Look for time words, 'for example', 'this' or 'these' that refer back to something.
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 4 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- A writer wants to add this sentence: "This ability makes them excellent rescue animals." [1] Dogs have an extraordinary sense of smell. [2] They can detect a single drop of scent in a swimming pool of water. [3] Many breeds also have great stamina. Where should the new sentence go? (after sentence 2 / before sentence 1 / It should not be added. / after sentence 3) → after sentence 2Prompt: Look for time words, 'for example', 'this' or 'these' that refer back to something.
- [1] To make a simple compost bin, start with a large container with a lid. [2] Finally, stir the mixture every week and wait. [3] Next, drill small holes in the sides for air. [4] Then add layers of fruit peel, leaves and soil. What is the most logical order? (1, 3, 4, 2 / 1, 2, 3, 4 / 3, 1, 4, 2 / 1, 4, 3, 2) → 1, 3, 4, 2Prompt: Look for time words, 'for example', 'this' or 'these' that refer back to something.
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Topic sentences and paragraphs.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Adding, deleting and revising for purpose.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-9.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder