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English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 45 minutes

Choosing the detail that best supports a point

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.7.1.BCCSS W.7.2.BEngland: KS3 Writing (paragraphing)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Choosing the detail that best supports a point.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Choosing the best topic sentence; Citing textual evidence

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 5 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choosing the best topic sentence; Citing textual evidence). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. ___ Some wear school-branded hoodies, others prefer plain jumpers, and a few would happily scrap uniform altogether. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Hoodies are warm. / Students have very different views about school uniform. / Uniforms come in many colours. / Jumpers can be washed easily.) → Students have very different views about school uniform.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?
  2. Topic sentence: "Recycling at home is easier than many families think." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (Most councils collect sorted recycling every week. / Plastic was first invented in the 1800s. / A labelled box by the bin makes sorting quick. / Rinsing containers takes only a few seconds.) → Plastic was first invented in the 1800s.Prompt: Reread the topic sentence. What is the paragraph promising to discuss?
  3. ___ First, choose a quiet space. Next, set a timer for twenty-five minutes. Finally, take a short break before starting again. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (I don't like homework. / Timers are useful in kitchens. / A few simple steps can make homework time far more productive. / Homework is set by teachers.) → A few simple steps can make homework time far more productive.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?

Hook · 5 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Choosing the detail that best supports a point. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 10 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Point: "Our school canteen should offer more plant-based meals." Which detail best supports this point?
  • Step 1: The best support is relevant (about the point) and specific (facts, figures, examples).
  • Step 2: Survey evidence directly shows demand for the change.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
  • Answer: In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 10 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Point: "Wildflower verges help bees." Which detail best supports this point? (Some wildflowers are purple. / Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower. / Bees can sting. / Mowing verges is noisy.) → Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower.Prompt: Which detail is directly about the point, not just the same topic?
  2. Read the question and choose. Point: "Learning a second language has benefits." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Some languages use different alphabets. • My aunt went to Portugal. • Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities. • Spanish has many speakers. (Some languages use different alphabets. / My aunt went to Portugal. / Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities. / Spanish has many speakers.) → Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.Prompt: Does the detail prove or illustrate the point, or is it just on the same topic?

You do: independent practice · 10 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 5 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Read the question and choose. Point: "The park needs more bins." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. • The park has a duck pond. • Many people walk their dogs there. • The park opened in 1901. (Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. / The park has a duck pond. / Many people walk their dogs there. / The park opened in 1901.) → Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.Prompt: Does the detail prove or illustrate the point, or is it just on the same topic?
  2. Point: "Reading for pleasure helps young people do better at school." Which detail best supports this point? (Some people prefer audiobooks. / Libraries are quiet places. / Many books have colourful covers. / Research has found that children who read for fun tend to make more progress in vocabulary and maths.) → Research has found that children who read for fun tend to make more progress in vocabulary and maths.Prompt: Which detail is directly about the point, not just the same topic?

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Choosing the best topic sentence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Choosing the detail that best supports a point

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  1. Question 1

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Video games can build useful skills." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Many games have beautiful music. • Some games are very expensive. • The first video game console went on sale in 1972. • Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.

    • A. Many games have beautiful music.
    • B. Some games are very expensive.
    • C. The first video game console went on sale in 1972.
    • D. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.
  2. Question 2

    Point: "Our school canteen should offer more plant-based meals." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
    • B. The canteen opens at 12.15.
    • C. Some students bring packed lunches.
    • D. Vegetables come in many colours.
  3. Question 3

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Learning a second language has benefits." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Some languages use different alphabets. • Spanish has many speakers. • Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities. • My aunt went to Portugal.

    • A. Some languages use different alphabets.
    • B. Spanish has many speakers.
    • C. Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.
    • D. My aunt went to Portugal.
  4. Question 4

    Point: "Wildflower verges help bees." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. Some wildflowers are purple.
    • B. Mowing verges is noisy.
    • C. Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower.
    • D. Bees can sting.
  5. Question 5

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Learning a second language has benefits." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities. • My aunt went to Portugal. • Spanish has many speakers. • Some languages use different alphabets.

    • A. Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.
    • B. My aunt went to Portugal.
    • C. Spanish has many speakers.
    • D. Some languages use different alphabets.
  6. Question 6

    Point: "Short breaks during study sessions improve concentration." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. Some students study in their bedrooms.
    • B. Timers can be bought cheaply.
    • C. Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.
    • D. Breaks are popular with everyone.
  7. Question 7

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Video games can build useful skills." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Many games have beautiful music. • The first video game console went on sale in 1972. • Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead. • Some games are very expensive.

    • A. Many games have beautiful music.
    • B. The first video game console went on sale in 1972.
    • C. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.
    • D. Some games are very expensive.
  8. Question 8

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Video games can build useful skills." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Some games are very expensive. • Many games have beautiful music. • Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead. • The first video game console went on sale in 1972.

    • A. Some games are very expensive.
    • B. Many games have beautiful music.
    • C. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.
    • D. The first video game console went on sale in 1972.

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Answer key: Choosing the detail that best supports a point

  1. 1. D. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.

  2. 2. A. In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.

  3. 3. C. Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.

  4. 4. C. Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower.

  5. 5. A. Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.

  6. 6. C. Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.

  7. 7. C. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.

  8. 8. C. Puzzle games require players to plan several steps ahead.