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English lesson plan · 8th grade (Year 9 in England) · 45 minutes

Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases

Writing & Editing

CCSS L.8.3CCSS W.8.2.CEngland: KS3 Writing (sentence variety)England: GCSE English Language (AO6 sentence structures)

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Combining sentences with conjunctions; -ing words: gerund, participle or main verb?

Leads to: Essential or non-essential? Commas with appositives and clauses; Using subordination to show how ideas relate; Identifying phrase types: absolute, appositive, participle, gerund…

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 5 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Combining sentences with conjunctions; -ing words: gerund, participle or main verb?). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. I studied hard. I didn't pass the test. Which choice combines the sentences most clearly? (I studied hard, so I didn't pass the test. / I studied hard, and so I didn't pass the test. / Because I studied hard, I didn't pass the test. / I studied hard, but I didn't pass the test.) → I studied hard, but I didn't pass the test.Prompt: What is the relationship between the two ideas: addition, contrast, cause, condition, choice or time?
  2. Choose the word that joins the ideas as described in brackets. She wanted to go swimming, ___ the pool was closed. (show contrast) (but / because / so / and) → butPrompt: Read the instruction in brackets: contrast, result, cause, condition, time or addition?
  3. What is the word in capitals doing in this sentence? SWIMMING is my favourite sport. (gerund (works as a noun) / participle (works as an adjective) / part of the main verb (is/was …ing)) → gerund (works as a noun)Prompt: Is there a helping verb (is, was, were, are) right before it? Then it's part of the main verb.

Hook · 5 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 10 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: The volunteers cleared the beach. They worked through the afternoon. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using a participle phrase?
  • Step 1: Appositives (a noun phrase that renames) and participle phrases let you combine ideas concisely without comma splices.
  • Step 2: The volunteers, who did the working, follow the participle phrase.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: Working through the afternoon, the volunteers cleared the beach.
  • Answer: Working through the afternoon, the volunteers cleared the beach.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 10 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Marie Curie won two Nobel Prizes. She was a physicist and chemist. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using an appositive? (Marie Curie was a physicist and chemist and she won and won two Nobel Prizes. / Marie Curie, a physicist and chemist, won two Nobel Prizes. / Marie Curie won two Nobel Prizes, she was a physicist and chemist. / A physicist and chemist won two Nobel Prizes, Marie Curie.) → Marie Curie, a physicist and chemist, won two Nobel Prizes.Prompt: Turn one sentence into a phrase that describes a noun in the other.
  2. What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? The robot, a prototype built by students, won first prize. (an appositive / a participle phrase) → an appositivePrompt: Does the added phrase start with a noun group (a…, the…) or with a verb form (-ing, -ed, -en)?

You do: independent practice · 10 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 5 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? The robot, a prototype built by students, won first prize. (an appositive / a participle phrase) → an appositivePrompt: Does the added phrase start with a noun group (a…, the…) or with a verb form (-ing, -ed, -en)?
  2. My grandmother taught me to bake bread. She is a retired teacher. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using an appositive? (A retired teacher taught me to bake, my grandmother, bread. / My grandmother a retired teacher taught me to bake bread. / My grandmother, a retired teacher, taught me to bake bread. / My grandmother taught me to bake bread, she is a retired teacher.) → My grandmother, a retired teacher, taught me to bake bread.Prompt: Turn one sentence into a phrase that describes a noun in the other.

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Combining sentences with conjunctions.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Essential or non-essential? Commas with appositives and clauses; Using subordination to show how ideas relate; Identifying phrase types: absolute, appositive, participle, gerund….
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases

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  1. Question 1

    What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? Glowing in the dark, the jellyfish drifted past the boat.

    • A. an appositive
    • B. a participle phrase
  2. Question 2

    The fox crept towards the henhouse. It was sniffing the air. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using a participle phrase?

    • A. Sniffing the air, the fox crept towards the henhouse.
    • B. The fox sniffing crept the air towards the henhouse.
    • C. Sniffing the air, the henhouse was approached by the fox.
    • D. The fox crept towards the henhouse, it was sniffing the air.
  3. Question 3

    What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? Racing down the hill, the cyclists reached sixty kilometres an hour.

    • A. an appositive
    • B. a participle phrase
  4. Question 4

    What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? Lisbon, the capital of Portugal, sits on seven hills.

    • A. an appositive
    • B. a participle phrase
  5. Question 5

    The Amazon is the largest rainforest on Earth. It produces a huge amount of oxygen. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using an appositive?

    • A. The Amazon is the largest rainforest on Earth, it produces a huge amount of oxygen.
    • B. The largest rainforest on Earth produces, the Amazon, a huge amount of oxygen.
    • C. The Amazon, the largest rainforest on Earth, produces a huge amount of oxygen.
    • D. The Amazon the largest rainforest on Earth produces a huge amount of oxygen.
  6. Question 6

    What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? The robot, a prototype built by students, won first prize.

    • A. an appositive
    • B. a participle phrase
  7. Question 7

    The volunteers cleared the beach. They worked through the afternoon. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using a participle phrase?

    • A. The volunteers cleared the beach, they worked through the afternoon.
    • B. Working through the afternoon, the beach was cleared.
    • C. Working through the afternoon, the volunteers cleared the beach.
    • D. The volunteers working cleared through the afternoon the beach.
  8. Question 8

    What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? Hidden under the floorboards, the letters stayed secret for a century.

    • A. an appositive
    • B. a participle phrase

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Answer key: Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases

  1. 1. B. a participle phrase

  2. 2. A. Sniffing the air, the fox crept towards the henhouse.

  3. 3. B. a participle phrase

  4. 4. A. an appositive

  5. 5. C. The Amazon, the largest rainforest on Earth, produces a huge amount of oxygen.

  6. 6. A. an appositive

  7. 7. C. Working through the afternoon, the volunteers cleared the beach.

  8. 8. B. a participle phrase