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English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 45 minutes

Dashes and ellipses for effect

Punctuation

CCSS L.7.2CCSS L.8.2.ACCSS L.8.2.BEngland: Y6 GPS (dashes)England: GCSE English Language (punctuation for effect)

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Dashes and ellipses for effect.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Brackets, dashes and commas for parenthesis

Leads to: Punctuation for style and emphasis; Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation; Colons and dashes before an explanation or list (SAT)

Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 5 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Brackets, dashes and commas for parenthesis). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which sentence uses parenthesis correctly? • Mr Diaz, our head teacher, plays the drums. • Mr, Diaz our head teacher plays the drums. • Mr Diaz, our head teacher plays the drums. • Mr Diaz our head teacher, plays the drums. (Mr Diaz, our head teacher, plays the drums. / Mr, Diaz our head teacher plays the drums. / Mr Diaz, our head teacher plays the drums. / Mr Diaz our head teacher, plays the drums.) → Mr Diaz, our head teacher, plays the drums.Prompt: Parenthesis is extra information. If you remove it, the sentence should still make sense.
  2. Which sentence uses parenthesis correctly? • Our cat, a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day. • Our, cat a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day. • Our cat a grumpy, old tabby sleeps all day. • Our cat, a grumpy old tabby sleeps all day. (Our cat, a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day. / Our, cat a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day. / Our cat a grumpy, old tabby sleeps all day. / Our cat, a grumpy old tabby sleeps all day.) → Our cat, a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day.Prompt: Parenthesis is extra information. If you remove it, the sentence should still make sense.
  3. Which sentence uses parenthesis correctly? • My uncle who (lives in Wales) keeps bees. • My (uncle who lives in Wales) keeps bees. • My uncle (who lives in Wales) keeps bees. • My uncle (who lives in Wales keeps bees). (My uncle who (lives in Wales) keeps bees. / My (uncle who lives in Wales) keeps bees. / My uncle (who lives in Wales) keeps bees. / My uncle (who lives in Wales keeps bees).) → My uncle (who lives in Wales) keeps bees.Prompt: Parenthesis is extra information. If you remove it, the sentence should still make sense.

Hook · 5 min

  • Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
  • Share the objective: Dashes and ellipses for effect. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 10 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: "I think… I think I've seen this place before," she whispered. What does the ellipsis (…) show?
  • Step 1: A single dash can add emphasis or a dramatic pause; an ellipsis shows hesitation, an unfinished thought or suspense.
  • Step 2: So the answer is: Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.
  • Answer: Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 10 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. I opened the box slowly – it was empty. What is the effect of the dash? (It joins two words into one. / It shows a list is coming. / It creates a pause before a surprising reveal. / It shows the words are a quotation.) → It creates a pause before a surprising reveal.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?
  2. "I think… I think I've seen this place before," she whispered. What does the ellipsis (…) show? (That the speaker is shouting. / That a word is spelt wrongly. / That the sentence is a question. / Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.) → Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?

You do: independent practice · 10 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 5 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. The door creaked open and… Why might a writer end a paragraph like this? (To introduce a list of items. / To show possession. / To create suspense by leaving the action unfinished. / To show the story has ended happily.) → To create suspense by leaving the action unfinished.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?
  2. I opened the box slowly – it was empty. What is the effect of the dash? (It shows the words are a quotation. / It shows a list is coming. / It creates a pause before a surprising reveal. / It joins two words into one.) → It creates a pause before a surprising reveal.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?

Watch out for

  • Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
  • Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Brackets, dashes and commas for parenthesis.
  • Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Punctuation for style and emphasis; Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation; Colons and dashes before an explanation or list (SAT).
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Dashes and ellipses for effect

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  1. Question 1

    We packed sandwiches, crisps, juice, fruit… everything we could carry. What does the ellipsis suggest here?

    • A. That two clauses are being contrasted.
    • B. That the speaker has forgotten what to say.
    • C. That the list could go on even longer.
    • D. That the sentence is a command.

  2. Question 2

    There was only one thing he feared – the dark. What does the dash do here?

    • A. It adds emphasis to the final words.
    • B. It shows missing letters.
    • C. It joins a prefix to a root word.
    • D. It marks the start of speech.

  3. Question 3

    "I think… I think I've seen this place before," she whispered. What does the ellipsis (…) show?

    • A. That the sentence is a question.
    • B. That the speaker is shouting.
    • C. Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.
    • D. That a word is spelt wrongly.

  4. Question 4

    The door creaked open and… Why might a writer end a paragraph like this?

    • A. To introduce a list of items.
    • B. To show possession.
    • C. To create suspense by leaving the action unfinished.
    • D. To show the story has ended happily.

  5. Question 5

    I opened the box slowly – it was empty. What is the effect of the dash?

    • A. It shows a list is coming.
    • B. It joins two words into one.
    • C. It creates a pause before a surprising reveal.
    • D. It shows the words are a quotation.

  6. Question 6

    "Wait – don't open that!" What does the dash suggest about how the words are spoken?

    • A. The speaker is calm and slow.
    • B. The speaker is reading a list.
    • C. The speaker is asking a polite question.
    • D. The speaker breaks off suddenly in alarm.

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Answer key: Dashes and ellipses for effect

  1. 1. C. That the list could go on even longer.

  2. 2. A. It adds emphasis to the final words.

  3. 3. C. Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.

  4. 4. C. To create suspense by leaving the action unfinished.

  5. 5. C. It creates a pause before a surprising reveal.

  6. 6. D. The speaker breaks off suddenly in alarm.