English lesson plan · 9th grade (Year 10 in England) · 45 minutes
Using subordination to show how ideas relate
Writing & Editing
CCSS L.9-10.1.BCCSS W.9-10.2.CEngland: GCSE English Language (AO5 and AO6)England: SAT Expression of IdeasEngland: ACT English
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Using subordination to show how ideas relate.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases; Combining sentences
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases; Combining sentences). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which is the best way to join these sentences? Leo practised every day. He won the competition. • Leo practised every day, so he won the competition. • Leo practised every day although he won the competition. • Leo practised every day or he won the competition. • Leo practised every day, he won the competition. (Leo practised every day, so he won the competition. / Leo practised every day although he won the competition. / Leo practised every day or he won the competition. / Leo practised every day, he won the competition.) → Leo practised every day, so he won the competition.Prompt: How are the two ideas linked: adding, contrasting, giving a reason, or a result?
- My grandmother taught me to bake bread. She is a retired teacher. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using an appositive? (My grandmother a retired teacher taught me to bake bread. / A retired teacher taught me to bake, my grandmother, bread. / My grandmother, a retired teacher, taught me to bake bread. / My grandmother taught me to bake bread, she is a retired teacher.) → My grandmother, a retired teacher, taught me to bake bread.Prompt: Turn one sentence into a phrase that describes a noun in the other.
- What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? Glowing in the dark, the jellyfish drifted past the boat. (an appositive / a participle phrase) → a participle phrasePrompt: Does the added phrase start with a noun group (a…, the…) or with a verb form (-ing, -ed, -en)?
Hook · 5 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Using subordination to show how ideas relate. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Some species of bamboo can grow almost a metre a day. Most trees grow only a few centimetres a year. Which choice best emphasises the contrast?
- Step 1: Subordination makes one idea depend on another, showing exactly how they relate and which matters most.
- Step 2: 'Whereas' sets up a direct contrast.
- Step 3: So the answer is: Whereas most trees grow only a few centimetres a year, some species of bamboo can grow almost a metre a day.
- Answer: Whereas most trees grow only a few centimetres a year, some species of bamboo can grow almost a metre a day.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Some species of bamboo can grow almost a metre a day. Most trees grow only a few centimetres a year. Which choice best emphasises the contrast? (Most trees grow a few centimetres a year, and bamboo also grows. / Whereas most trees grow only a few centimetres a year, some species of bamboo can grow almost a metre a day. / Most trees grow only a few centimetres a year, so some species of bamboo can grow almost a metre a day. / Because most trees grow slowly, bamboo grows fast.) → Whereas most trees grow only a few centimetres a year, some species of bamboo can grow almost a metre a day.Prompt: Decide the relationship: contrast, cause, result, condition, or extra detail.
- Choose the subordinating conjunction that makes the relationship logical. ___ the tickets were expensive, the concert sold out in minutes. (Although / Unless / Because / So that) → AlthoughPrompt: Is the relationship contrast, cause, purpose, condition, comparison or time?
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Choose the subordinating conjunction that makes the relationship logical. Lena prefers science, ___ her twin loves history. (whereas / because / unless / so that) → whereasPrompt: Is the relationship contrast, cause, purpose, condition, comparison or time?
- The museum is free. Few local people visit it. Which choice best shows the surprising relationship? (The museum is free, so few local people visit it. / The museum is free and few local people visit it so. / Because the museum is free, few local people visit it. / Even though the museum is free, few local people visit it.) → Even though the museum is free, few local people visit it.Prompt: Decide the relationship: contrast, cause, result, condition, or extra detail.
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-9.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder