English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 45 minutes
Dashes and ellipses for effect
Punctuation
CCSS L.7.2CCSS L.8.2.ACCSS L.8.2.BEngland: Y6 GPS (dashes)England: GCSE English Language (punctuation for effect)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Dashes and ellipses for effect.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Brackets, dashes and commas for parenthesis
Leads to: Punctuation for style and emphasis; Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation; Colons and dashes before an explanation or list (SAT)
Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Brackets, dashes and commas for parenthesis). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which sentence uses parenthesis correctly? • Our, cat a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day. • Our cat a grumpy, old tabby sleeps all day. • Our cat, a grumpy old tabby sleeps all day. • Our cat, a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day. (Our, cat a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day. / Our cat a grumpy, old tabby sleeps all day. / Our cat, a grumpy old tabby sleeps all day. / Our cat, a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day.) → Our cat, a grumpy old tabby, sleeps all day.Prompt: Parenthesis is extra information. If you remove it, the sentence should still make sense.
- Which sentence uses parenthesis correctly? • Mr Diaz our head teacher, plays the drums. • Mr Diaz, our head teacher, plays the drums. • Mr, Diaz our head teacher plays the drums. • Mr Diaz, our head teacher plays the drums. (Mr Diaz our head teacher, plays the drums. / Mr Diaz, our head teacher, plays the drums. / Mr, Diaz our head teacher plays the drums. / Mr Diaz, our head teacher plays the drums.) → Mr Diaz, our head teacher, plays the drums.Prompt: Parenthesis is extra information. If you remove it, the sentence should still make sense.
- Which sentence uses parenthesis correctly? • The volcano – which last erupted in 1902 is now quiet. • The volcano which – last erupted in 1902 – is now quiet. • The volcano – which last erupted in 1902 – is now quiet. • The – volcano which last erupted in 1902 – is now quiet. (The volcano – which last erupted in 1902 is now quiet. / The volcano which – last erupted in 1902 – is now quiet. / The volcano – which last erupted in 1902 – is now quiet. / The – volcano which last erupted in 1902 – is now quiet.) → The volcano – which last erupted in 1902 – is now quiet.Prompt: Parenthesis is extra information. If you remove it, the sentence should still make sense.
Hook · 5 min
- Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
- Share the objective: Dashes and ellipses for effect. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: "I think… I think I've seen this place before," she whispered. What does the ellipsis (…) show?
- Step 1: A single dash can add emphasis or a dramatic pause; an ellipsis shows hesitation, an unfinished thought or suspense.
- Step 2: So the answer is: Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.
- Answer: Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- I opened the box slowly – it was empty. What is the effect of the dash? (It joins two words into one. / It creates a pause before a surprising reveal. / It shows a list is coming. / It shows the words are a quotation.) → It creates a pause before a surprising reveal.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?
- We packed sandwiches, crisps, juice, fruit… everything we could carry. What does the ellipsis suggest here? (That the list could go on even longer. / That two clauses are being contrasted. / That the speaker has forgotten what to say. / That the sentence is a command.) → That the list could go on even longer.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- We packed sandwiches, crisps, juice, fruit… everything we could carry. What does the ellipsis suggest here? (That the sentence is a command. / That two clauses are being contrasted. / That the speaker has forgotten what to say. / That the list could go on even longer.) → That the list could go on even longer.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?
- There was only one thing he feared – the dark. What does the dash do here? (It adds emphasis to the final words. / It marks the start of speech. / It joins a prefix to a root word. / It shows missing letters.) → It adds emphasis to the final words.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?
Watch out for
- Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
- Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Brackets, dashes and commas for parenthesis.
- Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Punctuation for style and emphasis; Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation; Colons and dashes before an explanation or list (SAT).
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-7.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder