English lesson plan · 8th grade (Year 9 in England) · 45 minutes
Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases
Writing & Editing
CCSS L.8.3CCSS W.8.2.CEngland: KS3 Writing (sentence variety)England: GCSE English Language (AO6 sentence structures)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Combining sentences with conjunctions; -ing words: gerund, participle or main verb?
Leads to: Essential or non-essential? Commas with appositives and clauses; Using subordination to show how ideas relate; Identifying phrase types: absolute, appositive, participle, gerund…
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Combining sentences with conjunctions; -ing words: gerund, participle or main verb?). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- The roads were icy. School was closed. Which choice combines the sentences most clearly? (Unless the roads were icy, school was closed. / Because the roads were icy, school was closed. / Although the roads were icy, school was closed. / The roads were icy, but school was closed.) → Because the roads were icy, school was closed.Prompt: What is the relationship between the two ideas: addition, contrast, cause, condition, choice or time?
- Choose the word that joins the ideas as described in brackets. She wanted to go swimming, ___ the pool was closed. (show contrast) (because / but / and / so) → butPrompt: Read the instruction in brackets: contrast, result, cause, condition, time or addition?
- What is the word in capitals doing in this sentence? SWIMMING is my favourite sport. (gerund (works as a noun) / participle (works as an adjective) / part of the main verb (is/was …ing)) → gerund (works as a noun)Prompt: Is there a helping verb (is, was, were, are) right before it? Then it's part of the main verb.
Hook · 5 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Combining sentences with appositives and participle phrases. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: The volunteers cleared the beach. They worked through the afternoon. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using a participle phrase?
- Step 1: Appositives (a noun phrase that renames) and participle phrases let you combine ideas concisely without comma splices.
- Step 2: The volunteers, who did the working, follow the participle phrase.
- Step 3: So the answer is: Working through the afternoon, the volunteers cleared the beach.
- Answer: Working through the afternoon, the volunteers cleared the beach.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- The Amazon is the largest rainforest on Earth. It produces a huge amount of oxygen. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using an appositive? (The Amazon the largest rainforest on Earth produces a huge amount of oxygen. / The Amazon is the largest rainforest on Earth, it produces a huge amount of oxygen. / The largest rainforest on Earth produces, the Amazon, a huge amount of oxygen. / The Amazon, the largest rainforest on Earth, produces a huge amount of oxygen.) → The Amazon, the largest rainforest on Earth, produces a huge amount of oxygen.Prompt: Turn one sentence into a phrase that describes a noun in the other.
- What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? Racing down the hill, the cyclists reached sixty kilometres an hour. (an appositive / a participle phrase) → a participle phrasePrompt: Does the added phrase start with a noun group (a…, the…) or with a verb form (-ing, -ed, -en)?
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- The volunteers cleared the beach. They worked through the afternoon. Which choice combines the sentences most effectively using a participle phrase? (The volunteers cleared the beach, they worked through the afternoon. / Working through the afternoon, the beach was cleared. / The volunteers working cleared through the afternoon the beach. / Working through the afternoon, the volunteers cleared the beach.) → Working through the afternoon, the volunteers cleared the beach.Prompt: Turn one sentence into a phrase that describes a noun in the other.
- What has the writer used to combine ideas in this sentence? Our coach, a former Olympic swimmer, runs the club. (an appositive / a participle phrase) → an appositivePrompt: Does the added phrase start with a noun group (a…, the…) or with a verb form (-ing, -ed, -en)?
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Combining sentences with conjunctions.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Essential or non-essential? Commas with appositives and clauses; Using subordination to show how ideas relate; Identifying phrase types: absolute, appositive, participle, gerund….
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-8.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder