English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 45 minutes
Formal register and tone
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.7.1.DCCSS L.7.3England: Y6 GPS (formal language)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5England: ACT English (Style and Tone)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Formal register and tone.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Formal and informal vocabulary
Leads to: Style, tone and word choice (ACT English); Adapting register and tone to audience and purpose
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Formal and informal vocabulary). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which is the most FORMAL way to say "find out"? (discover / dig up / figure out / suss out) → discoverPrompt: Formal words suit official letters, reports and essays.
- Which is the most FORMAL way to say "need"? (require / wanna / could do with / gotta have) → requirePrompt: Formal words suit official letters, reports and essays.
- Which is the most FORMAL way to say "help"? (chip in / assist / pitch in / give a hand) → assistPrompt: Formal words suit official letters, reports and essays.
Hook · 5 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Formal register and tone. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: An essay paragraph analysing a poem. Which sentence is most appropriate?
- Step 1: Match your register to your audience and purpose; formal tasks need formal, precise language.
- Step 2: So the answer is: The poet's repeated images of grey skies create a bleak and lifeless atmosphere.
- Answer: The poet's repeated images of grey skies create a bleak and lifeless atmosphere.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- A complaint letter to a company about a broken product. Which sentence is most appropriate? (Lol the lamp broke already. / Unfortunately, the lamp I purchased stopped working after two days. / Your lamp is junk and I want my money back now. / The lamp's dead. Rubbish.) → Unfortunately, the lamp I purchased stopped working after two days.Prompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose?
- A speech to the town council about traffic. Which sentence is most appropriate? (Residents have reported serious concerns about speeding on Mill Road. / Mill Road is basically a racetrack, no joke. / Sort out Mill Road, it's a nightmare. / People are well annoyed about cars zooming down Mill Road.) → Residents have reported serious concerns about speeding on Mill Road.Prompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose?
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- An essay paragraph analysing a poem. Which sentence is most appropriate? (The poem is pretty depressing tbh. / The poet goes on and on about grey stuff. / I didn't really get the poem but it's sad. / The poet's repeated images of grey skies create a bleak and lifeless atmosphere.) → The poet's repeated images of grey skies create a bleak and lifeless atmosphere.Prompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose?
- A speech to the town council about traffic. Which sentence is most appropriate? (People are well annoyed about cars zooming down Mill Road. / Sort out Mill Road, it's a nightmare. / Residents have reported serious concerns about speeding on Mill Road. / Mill Road is basically a racetrack, no joke.) → Residents have reported serious concerns about speeding on Mill Road.Prompt: Who is the audience, and what is the purpose?
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Formal and informal vocabulary.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Style, tone and word choice (ACT English); Adapting register and tone to audience and purpose.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-7.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder