• Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Linking words to add and explain: in addition, for instance, as a result; Topic sentences and paragraphs). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
• Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.

1. Choose the linking phrase that fits best. Foxes eat many different foods. ___, they will eat berries, worms and even leftover pizza. (In addition / In other words / For instance / As a result) → For instancePrompt: Read both sentences. What does the second one do?
2. Our team trained every day. Moreover, we practised at weekends. What job does "Moreover" do? (adds another point / gives an example / shows a result / explains in other words) → adds another pointPrompt: Read what comes straight after the linking phrase.
3. ___ They can see in near darkness. Their soft feathers let them fly silently. Their sharp talons grip prey tightly. Which is the best topic sentence? (I saw an owl once. / Owls are well equipped for hunting at night. / Owls are birds. / Some birds eat seeds.) → Owls are well equipped for hunting at night.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?

• Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
• Share the objective: Hook your reader: choose the strongest opening. Read the success criteria together.

• Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
• Example: Which is the strongest opening for a story about a lost dog?
• Step 1: A strong opening hooks the reader with action, a question, a surprising fact or a vivid detail.
• Step 2: So the answer is: Somewhere in the storm, a small dog was howling my name.
• Answer: Somewhere in the storm, a small dog was howling my name.
• Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

• Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
• Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.

1. Which is the strongest opening for a story about a first day at school? (School is a place where children learn. / It was my first day at school. / This story is about school. / My new shoes squeaked with every step, and everyone turned to look.) → My new shoes squeaked with every step, and everyone turned to look.Prompt: Which one makes you want to keep reading?
2. What kind of hook is this opening? Some tortoises can live for more than a hundred years. (a question / a surprising fact / dialogue (speech) / action or vivid description) → a surprising factPrompt: Look at the punctuation: a question mark? Speech marks?

• Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
• Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

• Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.

1. Which is the strongest opening for a story about a robot? (This is a story about a robot. / Robots are machines. / There was a robot. / The robot's eyes flickered on, and the first thing it saw was me.) → The robot's eyes flickered on, and the first thing it saw was me.Prompt: Which one makes you want to keep reading?
2. What kind of hook is this opening? Thunder rattled the windows as Leo crept down the dark stairs. (a question / a surprising fact / dialogue (speech) / action or vivid description) → action or vivid descriptionPrompt: Look at the punctuation: a question mark? Speech marks?

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-5.