English lesson plan · 4th grade (Year 5 in England) · 45 minutes
Similes and metaphors
Vocabulary
CCSS L.4.5.ACCSS L.5.5.AEngland: Y4/5 Reading (figurative language)England: 11+ English
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Similes and metaphors.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Synonyms
Leads to: Idioms and proverbs; Figurative language: personification, hyperbole, alliteration, onomatopoeia; Literal or figurative meaning?
Materials: Word cards, A thesaurus or dictionary, A short text with the target words, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 5 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Synonyms). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which word means the SAME as "gift"? (present / storm / ladder / debt) → presentPrompt: A synonym has the same or nearly the same meaning.
- Which word is closest in meaning to "diligent"? (anxious / humble / lazy / hard-working) → hard-workingPrompt: One of the choices means the opposite. Don't be tricked!
- Choose the word that best fits the clue in brackets. The baby gave a ___ smile. (small and gentle) (angry / faint / wide / loud) → faintPrompt: Read the clue in brackets carefully.
Hook · 5 min
- Show an interesting word in a sentence and ask what it might mean from the clues around it.
- Share the objective: Similes and metaphors. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 10 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which kind of figurative language is this? The sun smiled down on the picnic.
- Step 1: A simile compares using 'like' or 'as'; a metaphor says one thing IS another; personification gives human qualities to non-human things.
- Step 2: So the answer is: personification
- Answer: personification
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 10 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which kind of figurative language is this? The baby's skin was as soft as silk. (simile / metaphor / personification) → similePrompt: Does it use 'like' or 'as' to compare?
- What does this metaphor mean? The road was a ribbon of moonlight. (It was blocked. / It was very dangerous. / It was made of cloth. / It shone and wound into the distance.) → It shone and wound into the distance.Prompt: A metaphor is not literally true.
You do: independent practice · 10 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 5 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Which kind of figurative language is this? Her smile was sunshine on a rainy day. (simile / metaphor / personification) → metaphorPrompt: Does it use 'like' or 'as' to compare?
- What does this metaphor mean? The test was a breeze. (It was cancelled. / It was windy outside. / It was very long. / It was very easy.) → It was very easy.Prompt: A metaphor is not literally true.
Watch out for
- Picking a "bigger" synonym that doesn't fit the meaning.
- Ignoring the clues in the rest of the sentence.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Synonyms.
- Use concrete materials: word cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Idioms and proverbs; Figurative language: personification, hyperbole, alliteration, onomatopoeia; Literal or figurative meaning?.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-4.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder