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English lesson plan · 8th grade (Year 9 in England) · 45 minutes

Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation

Punctuation

CCSS L.8.2.BCCSS L.8.2.AEngland: KS3 English (punctuation)England: GCSE English Language (embedding quotations)

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Dashes and ellipses for effect; Citing textual evidence

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 5 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Dashes and ellipses for effect; Citing textual evidence). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. We packed sandwiches, crisps, juice, fruit… everything we could carry. What does the ellipsis suggest here? (That the list could go on even longer. / That the sentence is a command. / That the speaker has forgotten what to say. / That two clauses are being contrasted.) → That the list could go on even longer.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?
  2. Claim: Ravi is nervous about his speech. A: "Ravi's hands shook as he shuffled his notes." B: "Ravi wore a blue shirt." C: "The hall was full." D: "Ravi's speech was about rainforests." Which sentence best supports the claim? (A / B / C / D) → APrompt: First decide what the answer to the question is.
  3. "I think… I think I've seen this place before," she whispered. What does the ellipsis (…) show? (That the speaker is shouting. / Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech. / That a word is spelt wrongly. / That the sentence is a question.) → Hesitation or a trailing pause in speech.Prompt: Read the sentence aloud. Where do you pause?

Hook · 5 min

  • Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
  • Share the objective: Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 10 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Which shortened quotation uses an ellipsis correctly and keeps the meaning? Original: "I was nervous, I admit, but I walked onto the stage." • "I was … stage." • "Nervous … but … walked." • "I … admit … stage." • "I was nervous … but I walked onto the stage."
  • Step 1: Use an ellipsis to remove unnecessary words from a quotation, keeping it grammatical and faithful to the original.
  • Step 2: The ellipsis removes 'I admit' and the rest still makes sense.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: "I was nervous … but I walked onto the stage."
  • Answer: "I was nervous … but I walked onto the stage."
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 10 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. What does the ellipsis (…) show here? She opened the door slowly and saw… nothing. (a dramatic pause to build suspense / a list / a mistake / words left out of a quotation) → a dramatic pause to build suspensePrompt: Is the ellipsis inside a quotation from a text, or in a character's speech or narration?
  2. Which shortened quotation uses an ellipsis correctly and keeps the meaning? Original: "The fox, which had been hiding under the shed for days, finally crept out into the moonlight." • "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight." • "The fox, … finally crept out into the moonlight …" • "The fox which had been hiding … crept out moonlight." • "The fox … under the shed … crept … moonlight." ("The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight." / "The fox, … finally crept out into the moonlight …" / "The fox which had been hiding … crept out moonlight." / "The fox … under the shed … crept … moonlight.") → "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight."Prompt: An ellipsis (…) shows that words have been left out of a quotation.

You do: independent practice · 10 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 8 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 5 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. What does the ellipsis (…) show here? "If only I had listened…" she sighed. (words left out of a quotation / an interruption by another speaker / a list / a sentence trailing off unfinished) → a sentence trailing off unfinishedPrompt: Is the ellipsis inside a quotation from a text, or in a character's speech or narration?
  2. Which shortened quotation uses an ellipsis correctly and keeps the meaning? Original: "I was nervous, I admit, but I walked onto the stage." • "I … admit … stage." • "I was nervous … but I walked onto the stage." • "I was … stage." • "Nervous … but … walked." ("I … admit … stage." / "I was nervous … but I walked onto the stage." / "I was … stage." / "Nervous … but … walked.") → "I was nervous … but I walked onto the stage."Prompt: An ellipsis (…) shows that words have been left out of a quotation.

Watch out for

  • Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
  • Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Dashes and ellipses for effect.
  • Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-8.

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Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation

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  1. Question 1

    What does the ellipsis (…) show here? The report said that the river "rose … to its highest level in fifty years."

    • A. a sentence trailing off into silence
    • B. a pause in speech
    • C. a list
    • D. words left out of a quotation
  2. Question 2

    Which shortened quotation uses an ellipsis correctly and keeps the meaning? Original: "The fox, which had been hiding under the shed for days, finally crept out into the moonlight." • "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight." • "The fox … under the shed … crept … moonlight." • "The fox, … finally crept out into the moonlight …" • "The fox which had been hiding … crept out moonlight."

    • A. "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight."
    • B. "The fox … under the shed … crept … moonlight."
    • C. "The fox, … finally crept out into the moonlight …"
    • D. "The fox which had been hiding … crept out moonlight."
  3. Question 3

    What does the ellipsis (…) show here? "If only I had listened…" she sighed.

    • A. an interruption by another speaker
    • B. words left out of a quotation
    • C. a list
    • D. a sentence trailing off unfinished
  4. Question 4

    Which shortened quotation uses an ellipsis correctly and keeps the meaning? Original: "Our school, like many others in the region, has started a breakfast club." • "Our school, like many others … club." • "Our school … started … club." • "… school … breakfast …" • "Our school … has started a breakfast club."

    • A. "Our school, like many others … club."
    • B. "Our school … started … club."
    • C. "… school … breakfast …"
    • D. "Our school … has started a breakfast club."
  5. Question 5

    What does the ellipsis (…) show here? "I think… no, I'm sure… it was here."

    • A. the end of a question
    • B. a pause or hesitation in speech
    • C. a list of items
    • D. words left out of a quotation
  6. Question 6

    Which shortened quotation uses an ellipsis correctly and keeps the meaning? Original: "The fox, which had been hiding under the shed for days, finally crept out into the moonlight." • "The fox … under the shed … crept … moonlight." • "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight." • "The fox, … finally crept out into the moonlight …" • "The fox which had been hiding … crept out moonlight."

    • A. "The fox … under the shed … crept … moonlight."
    • B. "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight."
    • C. "The fox, … finally crept out into the moonlight …"
    • D. "The fox which had been hiding … crept out moonlight."
  7. Question 7

    What does the ellipsis (…) show here? She opened the door slowly and saw… nothing.

    • A. a dramatic pause to build suspense
    • B. a list
    • C. words left out of a quotation
    • D. a mistake
  8. Question 8

    Which shortened quotation uses an ellipsis correctly and keeps the meaning? Original: "The fox, which had been hiding under the shed for days, finally crept out into the moonlight." • "The fox, … finally crept out into the moonlight …" • "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight." • "The fox which had been hiding … crept out moonlight." • "The fox … under the shed … crept … moonlight."

    • A. "The fox, … finally crept out into the moonlight …"
    • B. "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight."
    • C. "The fox which had been hiding … crept out moonlight."
    • D. "The fox … under the shed … crept … moonlight."

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Answer key: Using an ellipsis to shorten a quotation

  1. 1. D. words left out of a quotation

  2. 2. A. "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight."

  3. 3. D. a sentence trailing off unfinished

  4. 4. D. "Our school … has started a breakfast club."

  5. 5. B. a pause or hesitation in speech

  6. 6. B. "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight."

  7. 7. A. a dramatic pause to build suspense

  8. 8. B. "The fox … finally crept out into the moonlight."