English lesson plan · 4th grade (Year 5 in England) · 30 minutes
Punctuating direct speech: ? and ! inside, split speech, new speakers
Punctuation
CCSS L.4.2.BEngland: Y4 GPS (punctuation of direct speech)England: KS2 SATs GPS
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Punctuating direct speech: ? and ! inside, split speech, new speakers.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Commas in dialogue: Mum said, "…" and "…," said Mum
Leads to: Commas after openers, yes and no, tag questions and names
Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Commas in dialogue: Mum said, "…" and "…," said Mum). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (Kofi said, "This puzzle is tricky." / Kofi said, This puzzle is tricky. / Kofi said, "This puzzle is tricky". / Kofi said "This puzzle is tricky.") → Kofi said, "This puzzle is tricky."Prompt: A comma separates the spoken words from the words that say who is speaking.
- What is missing from this sentence? The vet said "Your cat is very healthy." (a comma after "healthy", inside the speech marks / a question mark after "healthy" / nothing: it is already correct / a comma after "said") → a comma after "said"Prompt: Find where the spoken words meet the words about who is speaking.
- What is missing from this sentence? "Your cat is very healthy" said the vet. (a comma after "healthy", inside the speech marks / nothing: it is already correct / a comma after "said" / a full stop after "healthy", outside the speech marks) → a comma after "healthy", inside the speech marksPrompt: Find where the spoken words meet the words about who is speaking.
Hook · 3 min
- Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
- Share the objective: Punctuating direct speech: ? and ! inside, split speech, new speakers. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Which sentence is punctuated correctly?
- Step 1: The spoken words end with ! inside the speech marks; then "yelled Nadia" continues in lower case.
- Step 2: So the answer is: "Goal!" yelled Nadia.
- Answer: "Goal!" yelled Nadia.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? ("Watch out," shouted Tom. / "Watch out!", shouted Tom. / "Watch out!" Shouted Tom. / "Watch out!" shouted Tom.) → "Watch out!" shouted Tom.Prompt: A question or an exclamation keeps its ? or ! INSIDE the speech marks.
- The speaker is interrupted in the middle of a sentence. Which is punctuated correctly? ("Before you go," said Gran, "Take an umbrella." / "Before you go," said Gran. "take an umbrella." / "Before you go" said Gran "take an umbrella." / "Before you go," said Gran, "take an umbrella.") → "Before you go," said Gran, "take an umbrella."Prompt: The spoken sentence is still one sentence, so the second part does not start with a capital.
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Which sentence is punctuated correctly? ("Can I help?" asked Zoe. / "Can I help?", asked Zoe. / "Can I help," asked Zoe. / "Can I help"? asked Zoe.) → "Can I help?" asked Zoe.Prompt: A question or an exclamation keeps its ? or ! INSIDE the speech marks.
- The speaker is interrupted in the middle of a sentence. Which is punctuated correctly? ("After lunch" said the coach "we will work on passing." / "After lunch," said the coach, "We will work on passing." / "After lunch," said the coach, "we will work on passing." / "After lunch," said the coach. "we will work on passing.") → "After lunch," said the coach, "we will work on passing."Prompt: The spoken sentence is still one sentence, so the second part does not start with a capital.
Watch out for
- Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
- Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Commas in dialogue: Mum said, "…" and "…," said Mum.
- Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Commas after openers, yes and no, tag questions and names.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-4.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder