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English lesson plan · 7th grade (Year 8 in England) · 30 minutes

Choosing the detail that best supports a point

Writing & Editing

CCSS W.7.1.BCCSS W.7.2.BEngland: KS3 Writing (paragraphing)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Choosing the detail that best supports a point.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Choosing the best topic sentence; Citing textual evidence

Leads to: the next skill in this area.

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 4 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Choosing the best topic sentence; Citing textual evidence). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. ___ Some wear school-branded hoodies, others prefer plain jumpers, and a few would happily scrap uniform altogether. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Students have very different views about school uniform. / Hoodies are warm. / Jumpers can be washed easily. / Uniforms come in many colours.) → Students have very different views about school uniform.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?
  2. Topic sentence: "Video calls helped many families stay close while living far apart." Which sentence does NOT belong in this paragraph? (Families shared birthdays on screen. / The first telephone call was made in 1876. / Grandparents could see grandchildren every week. / Cousins in different countries played games together online.) → The first telephone call was made in 1876.Prompt: Reread the topic sentence. What is the paragraph promising to discuss?
  3. ___ First, choose a quiet space. Next, set a timer for twenty-five minutes. Finally, take a short break before starting again. Which topic sentence best opens this paragraph? (Homework is set by teachers. / Timers are useful in kitchens. / A few simple steps can make homework time far more productive. / I don't like homework.) → A few simple steps can make homework time far more productive.Prompt: Read the supporting sentences first. What do they ALL have in common?

Hook · 3 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Choosing the detail that best supports a point. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 7 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Point: "Our school canteen should offer more plant-based meals." Which detail best supports this point?
  • Step 1: The best support is relevant (about the point) and specific (facts, figures, examples).
  • Step 2: Survey evidence directly shows demand for the change.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
  • Answer: In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 6 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Point: "Wildflower verges help bees." Which detail best supports this point? (Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower. / Some wildflowers are purple. / Bees can sting. / Mowing verges is noisy.) → Counts along one road found three times as many bees after the verges were left to flower.Prompt: Which detail is directly about the point, not just the same topic?
  2. Read the question and choose. Point: "The park needs more bins." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. • The park opened in 1901. • The park has a duck pond. • Many people walk their dogs there. (Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. / The park opened in 1901. / The park has a duck pond. / Many people walk their dogs there.) → Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.Prompt: Does the detail prove or illustrate the point, or is it just on the same topic?

You do: independent practice · 7 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 3 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Point: "Short breaks during study sessions improve concentration." Which detail best supports this point? (Timers can be bought cheaply. / Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping. / Some students study in their bedrooms. / Breaks are popular with everyone.) → Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.Prompt: Which detail is directly about the point, not just the same topic?
  2. Read the question and choose. Point: "The park needs more bins." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Many people walk their dogs there. • Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. • The park has a duck pond. • The park opened in 1901. (Many people walk their dogs there. / Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month. / The park has a duck pond. / The park opened in 1901.) → Volunteers collected 30 bags of litter there last month.Prompt: Does the detail prove or illustrate the point, or is it just on the same topic?

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Choosing the best topic sentence.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-7.

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Choosing the detail that best supports a point

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  1. Question 1

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Learning a second language has benefits." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Some languages use different alphabets. • Spanish has many speakers. • My aunt went to Portugal. • Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.

    • A. Some languages use different alphabets.
    • B. Spanish has many speakers.
    • C. My aunt went to Portugal.
    • D. Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.
  2. Question 2

    Point: "Our school canteen should offer more plant-based meals." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. Some students bring packed lunches.
    • B. The canteen opens at 12.15.
    • C. Vegetables come in many colours.
    • D. In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.
  3. Question 3

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Teenagers need more sleep than adults." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Many adults drink coffee. • Some teenagers have bunk beds. • Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults. • Sleep is important for everyone.

    • A. Many adults drink coffee.
    • B. Some teenagers have bunk beds.
    • C. Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.
    • D. Sleep is important for everyone.
  4. Question 4

    Point: "Dogs can be trained to help people with medical conditions." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. Dogs come in hundreds of breeds.
    • B. Some trained dogs can alert their owners to a dangerous drop in blood sugar before symptoms start.
    • C. Dogs were domesticated thousands of years ago.
    • D. My neighbour's dog barks at the postman.
  5. Question 5

    Read the question and choose. Point: "Teenagers need more sleep than adults." Which detail is MOST relevant? • Some teenagers have bunk beds. • Sleep is important for everyone. • Many adults drink coffee. • Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.

    • A. Some teenagers have bunk beds.
    • B. Sleep is important for everyone.
    • C. Many adults drink coffee.
    • D. Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.
  6. Question 6

    Point: "Short breaks during study sessions improve concentration." Which detail best supports this point?

    • A. Some students study in their bedrooms.
    • B. Timers can be bought cheaply.
    • C. Breaks are popular with everyone.
    • D. Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.

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Answer key: Choosing the detail that best supports a point

  1. 1. D. Speaking two languages can open up more job opportunities.

  2. 2. D. In a canteen survey, 64% of students said they would choose a vegetarian option at least once a week.

  3. 3. C. Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.

  4. 4. B. Some trained dogs can alert their owners to a dangerous drop in blood sugar before symptoms start.

  5. 5. D. Health experts recommend 8–10 hours a night for teenagers but 7–9 for adults.

  6. 6. D. Students who took a five-minute break every half hour made fewer errors in an experiment than those who studied without stopping.