English lesson plan · 5th grade (Year 6 in England) · 30 minutes
Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion)
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.5.2.CCCSS W.5.1.CEngland: Y5 GPS (cohesive devices)England: KS2 SATs GPS
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion).
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Topic sentences and paragraphs
Leads to: Transitions (SAT/ACT)
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Topic sentences and paragraphs). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- ___ It gives pupils exercise. It teaches teamwork. It also helps them make friends. Which is the best topic sentence? (Football is played with a ball. / Teamwork is a word. / Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils. / Some pupils prefer reading.) → Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
- ___ First, gather your ingredients. Next, mix them in a large bowl. Finally, bake for twenty minutes. Which is the best topic sentence? (Muffins are delicious. / My aunt has an oven. / Bowls can be large or small. / Making muffins is simple if you follow three steps.) → Making muffins is simple if you follow three steps.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
- ___ They can see in near darkness. Their soft feathers let them fly silently. Their sharp talons grip prey tightly. Which is the best topic sentence? (Owls are birds. / I saw an owl once. / Owls are well equipped for hunting at night. / Some birds eat seeds.) → Owls are well equipped for hunting at night.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
Hook · 3 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Linking ideas across paragraphs (cohesion). Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Sharks have several rows of teeth. ___, they can lose a tooth and quickly replace it.
- Step 1: Adverbials such as however, for example, as a result and meanwhile make writing cohesive.
- Step 2: Put it back into the sentence and read it aloud: "Sharks have several rows of teeth. Consequently, they can lose a tooth and quickly replace it."
- Step 3: So the answer is: Consequently
- Answer: Consequently
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. We visited the castle in the morning. ___, we explored the woods. (Afterwards / However / For example / Therefore) → AfterwardsPrompt: How does the second sentence relate to the first: time, contrast, example or result?
- Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. It rained all week. ___, the river burst its banks. (As a result / For example / Meanwhile / In contrast) → As a resultPrompt: How does the second sentence relate to the first: time, contrast, example or result?
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. It rained all week. ___, the river burst its banks. (In contrast / For example / Meanwhile / As a result) → As a resultPrompt: How does the second sentence relate to the first: time, contrast, example or result?
- Choose the linking word or phrase that fits best. Ali was chopping vegetables. ___, his sister laid the table. (Therefore / For example / Meanwhile / In conclusion) → MeanwhilePrompt: How does the second sentence relate to the first: time, contrast, example or result?
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Topic sentences and paragraphs.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Transitions (SAT/ACT).
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-5.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder