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English lesson plan · 11th grade (Year 12 in England) · 30 minutes

Punctuating such as, including and supplements (SAT)

Punctuation

CCSS L.11-12.2CCSS L.9-10.2.BEngland: SAT Standard English Conventions (Boundaries)England: ACT English

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Punctuating such as, including and supplements (SAT).

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Colons and dashes before an explanation or list (SAT)

Leads to: Punctuating complex sentences accurately

Materials: Punctuation cards, A short unpunctuated text, Highlighters, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 4 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Colons and dashes before an explanation or list (SAT)). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. What punctuation (if any) belongs at [?] The festival offers three things [?] music, food and fireworks. (: / ; / no punctuation) → :Prompt: Is everything BEFORE [?] a complete sentence? If not, don't use a colon.
  2. In which sentence does [?] need this: :? (The scientist — who had worked on the project for a decade [?] finally published her results. / The hikers faced one serious problem [?] the bridge had collapsed. / Ana packed [?] a tent, a stove, two maps and a first-aid kit.) → The hikers faced one serious problem [?] the bridge had collapsed.Prompt: Is everything BEFORE [?] a complete sentence? If not, don't use a colon.
  3. What punctuation (if any) belongs at [?] Ana packed everything she needed [?] a tent, a stove, two maps and a first-aid kit. (: / ; / no punctuation) → :Prompt: Is everything BEFORE [?] a complete sentence? If not, don't use a colon.

Hook · 3 min

  • Read a short passage with no punctuation and let the class hear why it's confusing.
  • Share the objective: Punctuating such as, including and supplements (SAT). Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 7 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English? Animals ___ camels can survive for weeks without drinking.
  • Step 1: Non-essential 'such as/including' phrases take commas; essential ones don't; colons introduce lists or explanations only after a complete clause.
  • Step 2: Here 'such as camels' is essential to the meaning (only animals like camels), so no commas.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: such as
  • Answer: such as
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 6 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. Is this sentence correct in formal written English (SAT/ACT style)? Several planets, including Jupiter and Saturn, have dozens of moons. (correct / incorrect) → correctPrompt: Is the 'such as / including' information extra (non-essential) or needed to identify the group?
  2. Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English? The scientist made a startling ___ the comet was mostly ice. (discovery, / discovery / discovery: / discovery; such as) → discovery:Prompt: Is the 'such as / including' information extra (non-essential) or needed to identify the group?

You do: independent practice · 7 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 6 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 3 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English? The kit contains everything a beginner ___ a tent, a stove and a map. (needs / needs; / needs: / needs, such as:) → needs:Prompt: Is the 'such as / including' information extra (non-essential) or needed to identify the group?
  2. Is this sentence correct in formal written English (SAT/ACT style)? Several planets ; including Jupiter and Saturn, have dozens of moons. (correct / incorrect) → incorrectPrompt: Is the 'such as / including' information extra (non-essential) or needed to identify the group?

Watch out for

  • Using commas where a full stop (period) is needed.
  • Putting apostrophes in plurals (apple's).

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Colons and dashes before an explanation or list (SAT).
  • Use concrete materials: punctuation cards.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Punctuating complex sentences accurately.
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Punctuating such as, including and supplements (SAT)

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  1. Question 1

    Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English? Her research focuses on ___ such as bees and butterflies.

    • A. pollinators
    • B. pollinators;
    • C. pollinators:
  2. Question 2

    Is this sentence correct in formal written English (SAT/ACT style)? Many desert animals, such as camels and fennec foxes, can survive for long periods without drinking.

    • A. correct
    • B. incorrect
  3. Question 3

    Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English? Animals ___ camels can survive for weeks without drinking.

    • A. : such as
    • B. , such as
    • C. ; such as
    • D. such as
  4. Question 4

    Is this sentence correct in formal written English (SAT/ACT style)? The festival celebrates several art forms, including music, film and food.

    • A. correct
    • B. incorrect
  5. Question 5

    Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English? The festival celebrates several ___ including music, film and food.

    • A. art forms;
    • B. art forms
    • C. art forms:
    • D. art forms,
  6. Question 6

    Is this sentence correct in formal written English (SAT/ACT style)? The festival celebrates several art forms: including music, film and food.

    • A. correct
    • B. incorrect

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Answer key: Punctuating such as, including and supplements (SAT)

  1. 1. A. pollinators

  2. 2. A. correct

  3. 3. D. such as

  4. 4. A. correct

  5. 5. D. art forms,

  6. 6. B. incorrect