English lesson plan · 10th grade (Year 11 in England) · 30 minutes
Thesis statements and supporting evidence
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.9-10.1.ACCSS W.9-10.1.BEngland: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5England: US argumentative essay
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Thesis statements and supporting evidence.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Topic sentences and paragraphs; Claims, reasons and evidence
Leads to: Academic style: hedging, nominalisation and objectivity; Is it an arguable thesis?
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Topic sentences and paragraphs; Claims, reasons and evidence). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- ___ They can see in near darkness. Their soft feathers let them fly silently. Their sharp talons grip prey tightly. Which is the best topic sentence? (Some birds eat seeds. / Owls are well equipped for hunting at night. / Owls are birds. / I saw an owl once.) → Owls are well equipped for hunting at night.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
- Schools should plant more trees. Trees provide shade on hot days, clean the air, and give pupils a calm place to read. A study in one city found that pupils with green views from their classrooms scored higher on attention tests. What is the writer's claim? (Pupils like reading. / Cities have many schools. / Schools should plant more trees. / Trees provide shade.) → Schools should plant more trees.Prompt: What is the writer's main claim?
- Our town needs a skate park. Young people have nowhere safe to skate, so they use car parks, which is dangerous. A skate park would keep them safe and give them a place to meet. What reason does the writer give? (Skating is an Olympic sport. / Skate parks are cheap. / Skaters currently use dangerous car parks. / Everyone in town skates.) → Skaters currently use dangerous car parks.Prompt: What is the writer's main claim?
Hook · 3 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Thesis statements and supporting evidence. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: Thesis: The town should ban single-use plastic bags. Which sentence best acknowledges and answers a counterargument?
- Step 1: Arguments need a clear thesis supported by relevant, credible evidence.
- Step 2: So the answer is: Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves.
- Answer: Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- Thesis: Public parks are essential to healthy cities. Which is the most convincing supporting evidence? (Parks have trees. / My friend likes going to the park. / Some parks have cafés. / A study of ten cities found that residents living near parks reported 20% lower stress levels.) → A study of ten cities found that residents living near parks reported 20% lower stress levels.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.
- Thesis: The town should ban single-use plastic bags. Which sentence best acknowledges and answers a counterargument? (Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves. / Plastic bags are bad. / Bags can be blue or white. / Everyone agrees with me.) → Some shoppers worry about the cost of reusable bags, but most last for years and quickly pay for themselves.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 5 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- Topic: Is social media good for young people? Which is the strongest thesis statement? (While social media can connect young people, its effects on sleep, attention and self-esteem mean that its use should be limited. / I will talk about social media. / There are lots of apps. / Social media is a thing many people use.) → While social media can connect young people, its effects on sleep, attention and self-esteem mean that its use should be limited.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.
- Thesis: Public parks are essential to healthy cities. Which is the most convincing supporting evidence? (Some parks have cafés. / My friend likes going to the park. / Parks have trees. / A study of ten cities found that residents living near parks reported 20% lower stress levels.) → A study of ten cities found that residents living near parks reported 20% lower stress levels.Prompt: A strong thesis takes a clear, arguable position and hints at the reasons.
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Topic sentences and paragraphs.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Move on to: Academic style: hedging, nominalisation and objectivity; Is it an arguable thesis?.
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-10.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder