English lesson plan · 4th grade (Year 5 in England) · 30 minutes
Put the sentences of a paragraph in a logical order
Writing & Editing
CCSS W.4.2.ACCSS W.4.3.CEngland: Y4 Writing (organising paragraphs)England: Y3/4 Writing (composition)
Objective and success criteria
Students will: Put the sentences of a paragraph in a logical order.
- I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
- I can explain each step and say why it works.
- I can check my answer and spot a mistake.
Before and after
Needs first: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?; Putting sentences in order
Leads to: the next skill in this area.
Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).
Warm-up · 4 min
- Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?; Putting sentences in order). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
- Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
- Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Getting ready for a sleepover is fun. (2) First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush. (3) Next, choose a game or a film to share. (4) Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow. (5) Volcanoes can erupt without warning. (First, pack your pyjamas and toothbrush. / Volcanoes can erupt without warning. / Finally, remember your sleeping bag and pillow. / Next, choose a game or a film to share.) → Volcanoes can erupt without warning.Prompt: Read the first sentence: it tells you what the paragraph is about.
- Read the start of the paragraph. Which sentence would fit best as the next sentence? Sea otters are clever tool users. They float on their backs and place a flat stone on their chests. Then they smash shellfish against the stone to open them. (The tomatoes are bright red and ready to pick. / Some otters keep a favourite stone in a pouch of skin under their arm. / Others explore places too dangerous for humans, like deep oceans. / Instead, their wings work like flippers for swimming.) → Some otters keep a favourite stone in a pouch of skin under their arm.Prompt: What is the paragraph about? Look at the first sentence.
- Read the paragraph. Which sentence does not belong? (1) Sea otters are clever tool users. (2) They float on their backs and place a flat stone on their chests. (3) Giraffes have very long necks. (4) Then they smash shellfish against the stone to open them. (5) Some otters keep a favourite stone in a pouch of skin under their arm. (Then they smash shellfish against the stone to open them. / Sea otters are clever tool users. / Giraffes have very long necks. / They float on their backs and place a flat stone on their chests.) → Giraffes have very long necks.Prompt: Read the first sentence: it tells you what the paragraph is about.
Hook · 3 min
- Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
- Share the objective: Put the sentences of a paragraph in a logical order. Read the success criteria together.
I do: model it · 7 min
- Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
- Example: These sentences come from one paragraph. Which one should come FIRST, as the topic sentence?
- Step 1: The topic sentence tells you what the whole paragraph is about; the others give the steps or details.
- Step 2: So the answer is: Making a paper boat is easy.
- Answer: Making a paper boat is easy.
- Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.
We do: guided practice · 6 min
- Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
- Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
- These sentences come from one paragraph. Which one should come FIRST, as the topic sentence? (In the morning, he could not find his classroom. / Then a girl called Ruby offered to show him the way. / By home time, Kai was already looking forward to tomorrow. / Kai's first day at the new school went better than he expected.) → Kai's first day at the new school went better than he expected.Prompt: A topic sentence introduces the whole paragraph.
You do: independent practice · 7 min
- Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
- Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.
The 1 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.
Exit ticket · 3 min
- Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
- These sentences come from one paragraph. Which one should come FIRST, as the topic sentence? (Then it forms a chrysalis around itself. / Next, it eats and grows for several weeks. / A caterpillar goes through amazing changes. / First, it hatches from a tiny egg on a leaf.) → A caterpillar goes through amazing changes.Prompt: A topic sentence introduces the whole paragraph.
Watch out for
- Writing everything at once without planning.
- Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.
Support and stretch
Support
- Review first: Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?.
- Use concrete materials: a model text.
- Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
- Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.
Stretch
- Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
- Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.
Homework and more practice
Free online practice with hints and printable worksheets for this skill: eurekami.com/english/grade-4.
Free lesson plan from eurekami.com/lesson-plan-builder