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English lesson plan · 9th grade (Year 10 in England) · 30 minutes

Organisation: sentence placement and logical order

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CCSS W.9-10.1.CCCSS W.9-10.2.AEngland: ACT English (Organization)England: GCSE English Language Paper 2 Q5

Objective and success criteria

Students will: Organisation: sentence placement and logical order.

  • I can answer questions on today's skill on my own, without help.
  • I can explain each step and say why it works.
  • I can check my answer and spot a mistake.

Before and after

Needs first: Topic sentences and paragraphs; Transitions (SAT/ACT)

Leads to: Adding, deleting and revising for purpose

Materials: A model text, Planning frame, Checklists for editing, Mini whiteboards, A short model text on the board, Printed student sheet (below).

Warm-up · 4 min

  • Quick retrieval from earlier learning (Topic sentences and paragraphs; Transitions (SAT/ACT)). Students answer on mini whiteboards.
  • Show answers together and note who needs support in the main task.
  1. Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? The museum attracted record visitors in July. ___, attendance fell sharply in August. (Moreover / Therefore / For example / However) → HoweverPrompt: Read both sentences. What is the relationship between them?
  2. ___ It gives pupils exercise. It teaches teamwork. It also helps them make friends. Which is the best topic sentence? (Teamwork is a word. / Some pupils prefer reading. / Football is played with a ball. / Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.) → Playing a team sport has many benefits for pupils.Prompt: What is the paragraph mostly about?
  3. Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition? Many desert plants store water in thick stems. ___, the saguaro cactus can hold hundreds of litres. (However / For example / In contrast / Therefore) → For examplePrompt: Read both sentences. What is the relationship between them?

Hook · 3 min

  • Show two openings to the same piece of writing and ask which makes them want to read on.
  • Share the objective: Organisation: sentence placement and logical order. Read the success criteria together.

I do: model it · 7 min

  • Work through the example out loud, saying why you do each step, not just what you do.
  • Example: A writer wants to add this sentence: "This ability makes them excellent rescue animals." [1] Dogs have an extraordinary sense of smell. [2] They can detect a single drop of scent in a swimming pool of water. [3] Many breeds also have great stamina. Where should the new sentence go?
  • Step 1: Logical order uses time sequence, general-to-specific movement and clear references back.
  • Step 2: 'This ability' refers to the sense of smell described in sentence 2.
  • Step 3: So the answer is: after sentence 2
  • Answer: after sentence 2
  • Pause after each step and ask a student to say what comes next.

We do: guided practice · 6 min

  • Do these together. Students try each step on whiteboards before you reveal it.
  • Use the hints as prompts rather than giving the answer.
  1. [1] To make a simple compost bin, start with a large container with a lid. [2] Finally, stir the mixture every week and wait. [3] Next, drill small holes in the sides for air. [4] Then add layers of fruit peel, leaves and soil. What is the most logical order? (1, 4, 3, 2 / 3, 1, 4, 2 / 1, 2, 3, 4 / 1, 3, 4, 2) → 1, 3, 4, 2Prompt: Look for time words, 'for example', 'this' or 'these' that refer back to something.
  2. [1] Tardigrades are tiny animals less than a millimetre long. [2] For example, they have survived the vacuum of space. [3] They are famous for surviving extreme conditions. [4] They can also withstand temperatures close to absolute zero. To make the paragraph most logical, sentence 3 should be placed… (before sentence 2. / after sentence 4. / before sentence 1. / where it is now.) → before sentence 2.Prompt: Look for time words, 'for example', 'this' or 'these' that refer back to something.

You do: independent practice · 7 min

  • Students work on the student sheet. Circulate and check the first two answers of every student early.
  • Students who finish: write a question of their own for a partner, with the answer.

The 4 questions are on the student sheet below, with answers in the key.

Exit ticket · 3 min

  • Two questions on their own. Sort answers into got it / nearly / not yet to plan the next lesson.
  1. [1] The first public library in the town opened in 1887. [2] Today, it lends e-books as well as print. [3] At first, it held just 300 books, all donated. [4] Over the next century, its collection grew to more than 50,000 volumes. To make the paragraph most logical, sentence 2 should be placed… (before sentence 1. / after sentence 3. / after sentence 4. / where it is now.) → after sentence 4.Prompt: Look for time words, 'for example', 'this' or 'these' that refer back to something.
  2. A writer wants to add this sentence: "This ability makes them excellent rescue animals." [1] Dogs have an extraordinary sense of smell. [2] They can detect a single drop of scent in a swimming pool of water. [3] Many breeds also have great stamina. Where should the new sentence go? (It should not be added. / after sentence 3 / before sentence 1 / after sentence 2) → after sentence 2Prompt: Look for time words, 'for example', 'this' or 'these' that refer back to something.

Watch out for

  • Writing everything at once without planning.
  • Editing only spelling and not whether the writing makes sense.

Support and stretch

Support

  • Review first: Topic sentences and paragraphs.
  • Use concrete materials: a model text.
  • Give the first step of each question, or a partly worked example to finish.
  • Pair with a confident partner for the guided practice.

Stretch

  • Move on to: Adding, deleting and revising for purpose.
  • Explain a common mistake in writing and how to fix it.
  • Write a word problem that uses today's skill, then solve a partner's.

Homework and more practice

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Organisation: sentence placement and logical order

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  1. Question 1

    [1] To make a simple compost bin, start with a large container with a lid. [2] Finally, stir the mixture every week and wait. [3] Next, drill small holes in the sides for air. [4] Then add layers of fruit peel, leaves and soil. What is the most logical order?

    • A. 1, 3, 4, 2
    • B. 1, 2, 3, 4
    • C. 1, 4, 3, 2
    • D. 3, 1, 4, 2
  2. Question 2

    A writer wants to add this sentence: "This ability makes them excellent rescue animals." [1] Dogs have an extraordinary sense of smell. [2] They can detect a single drop of scent in a swimming pool of water. [3] Many breeds also have great stamina. Where should the new sentence go?

    • A. It should not be added.
    • B. after sentence 3
    • C. before sentence 1
    • D. after sentence 2
  3. Question 3

    [1] The first public library in the town opened in 1887. [2] Today, it lends e-books as well as print. [3] At first, it held just 300 books, all donated. [4] Over the next century, its collection grew to more than 50,000 volumes. To make the paragraph most logical, sentence 2 should be placed…

    • A. after sentence 3.
    • B. where it is now.
    • C. after sentence 4.
    • D. before sentence 1.
  4. Question 4

    [1] Tardigrades are tiny animals less than a millimetre long. [2] For example, they have survived the vacuum of space. [3] They are famous for surviving extreme conditions. [4] They can also withstand temperatures close to absolute zero. To make the paragraph most logical, sentence 3 should be placed…

    • A. before sentence 2.
    • B. where it is now.
    • C. after sentence 4.
    • D. before sentence 1.

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Answer key: Organisation: sentence placement and logical order

  1. 1. A. 1, 3, 4, 2

  2. 2. D. after sentence 2

  3. 3. C. after sentence 4.

  4. 4. A. before sentence 2.